Posted by Don This is an intense and annoyingly amazing cliffhanger to continue the series its by far one of the best stories I have read.
Posted by ian keeping me in suspense like that gets me going. cant wait for part 4
Posted by R.C omg u write the best story ever...it's like watching a movie. Keep up the good work!
Posted by Chris I agree with everyone. This is better than the second. Take your time in writing so we, the readers, get more...think of it as taking more pride it the work by making us wait. But then again I'm a perfectionist, and well this is pretty damn close to it.
Posted by magicof2004 hello everyone, i'm new to this story and i just finished the three parts lovvvvvvvvved it.
Mr david please dony let us wait for the fourth part and by the way its a good chance to get ride of the asshole todd know
Posted by Marcell Totally agree with everyone. Question for David, Are you related to Chris Green in the Detention Story?:-)
Posted by David Green Thank you everbody for your great reviews! Two things: Chris you are just adorable and I am by no means perfect but I'll try just for you. Also Marcell I am not related to Chris Green in Detention Story but I would be damn lucky if I were!
Love David Green
Posted by Michael I think Chris put it very succinctly. Take your time writing. Your details are wonderful and I enjoy reading every word. You are by far one of the top five writers I've read over the years, and I have read alot. Keep up the good work!
Posted by CRISTOPHER LOPEZ THIS IS A VERY LOVELY STORIE I LOVE TO READ A STORIE WITH PASSION AND LOVE AND A GREAT SEX ENCOUNTER...... KEEP MAKING GD STORIES
"OH GAWDDDD. SHIT! UHHH UHHH OHHHHH SHITTTTT. DOUGGGG!" erin felt himself yelling as he pulled his dick out and started to jack shooting his load on dougs face and coloring his already white teeth whiter with jizz...