Posted by IAN WHAT???????????
Posted by Jake Holy big peice of undigested shit, im sorry mate but i could have translated arabic better than translating that. Good story in a way but so very hard to understand that i had to have a rest after each paragrapgh. Also i had to remember to keep my fluids up or I WOULD HAVE SRIVLED UP.
Posted by jardonn Sure is heady stuff -- many good points and questions. Only suggestion I'd have is to make the ideas you put into the fourth and fifth paragraphs part of the intro. With this, the reader would know the focus of your piece from the start and better understand the points made later. I liked it once I got past the first three parapgraphs.
Posted by josh~ ..i didn't get it.. but i guess im not very smart anyway.... the guy on this lil picture on the side its an add or w/e he's giving another guy head the naughty studs one young gay boys hes SOo HOOt! like really hot ::admires boy:: i'll just sit here and stare at him for a few more minutes.
Tim picked up the pace, gradually, still watching Jason’s every move. Much to his pleasure, Jason was loving every minute of his thick cock fucking him...