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Posted by Drake747
Nice story dude. I hope this is a series or somethin', just to tie up loose ends. Like, what'll happen to the "some other time" thing? And, what about the kid? Where has he gone to?
Posted by Dre
Okay story man just needs a little more attention to details, and follow through, keep up the good work and keep up with the characters and let your readers know what happens to each of them. Take care and good luck,
Posted by Jaysen
Great story, cant wait for the next one!
Posted by Sebastian Wallace
Life is full of loose ends; full of "some other time"s that don't transpire; full of inconclusive encounters. Or at least mine is and that's how my stories are. If you don't appreciate a writer who enjoys teasing his readers by taking them along unpredictable and sometimes unresolved paths, I suggest you try some of the other authors here. Some of those fan-meets-boy-band stories are, I gather, a little more formulaic and perhaps the kind of thing you're looking for.
Posted by Gus
Whew! Tats hot! I thought the peeping young guy is the bus boy. Anyways I like the ending alot. Unexpected.
Posted by Gus
I didn't read the reviews before I wrote mine. Somewhat I feel bad for SW. So I need to say this is one of the best stories I have read from here at least I j/o twice. Good story and please don't let the negative comments discourage u from writing for those readers who appreciate ur work. Thanks,
Posted by dreamer
love u seb! I love all ur stories... they r very erotic and make me horny as fuck.... Wish i cud see u...
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