Alex & Zach : Part I reviews

Every time i read either part one or part two or as i DO both it just makes me want to cry cause i wish i could find a man that loves me like that and tells me we will never be apart. Please e-mail me back.

hot story really gave me a boner

I seriously started this three different times thinking it would get better, but seriously, if someone is going to be writing a story, try being more descriptive, this is moving way too fast to make it seem as if it was fiction, I believe its fiction.

Thanks for the comments everyone!! i'm really happy that u liked my story!!