Anthony reviews

excellent..very moving

I have never seen a story so detailed....awesome!

Loved it!!

Sorry, if you're looking to write a sex story, and maybe you're not I don't know, every chapter should have sex in it. In this case, a short story, one third of the story should be the lead in and the rest should be sex. IMHO...You might want to read "Elements of Arousal. How to write and sell gay men's erotica"

I read the story to my lover as we lay on the bed and we both got off. It's a warm and very real story.

AND WHERE IS THE HOT FUCKING SEX!!!!!!

Sorry Tobias, but the majority liked my story, so I intend to remain on the same structure. If you want a store with nothing but sex, go find one with little to no thought at all in it.

Don't worry about it Brandon, there are far too many horny young twinks that just wanna get off in this world, they just don't care about emotion. You're right, putting sex in every 4 lines doesn't always result in a good story...

Hey is this really a relation ship your in??? if so its sweet.

Brandon, Variety is the name of the game. In between hard pron you put in such a lovely soft porn story. Lovely!

vERRY GOOD

I loved this story and I'm glad Im not the only teen out there reading this stuff! Dont change a thing...the emotional part is much more arousing than the sex stuff anyday! This is a great story and I'm looking forward to the second part!

i love this story so much i wish it could happen to me!!!

I READ THE OTHER REVIEWS AND SEEN MAY LIKED IT BUT SOME WANTED SEX BUT LIKE MANE SAID EVERY STORY WILL NOT HAVE SEX SO KEEP WRITING YOUR STORIES THE WAY YOU LIKE IT TO BE . I LIKE TO STORY JUST BECAUSE IT DID NOT HAVE MUCH SEX I STILL LOVED IT

SEE THATS WHAT A STORY SHOULD BE U TWO DID NOT HAVE SEX UNTIL U BOTH KNOW U BE TOGETHER TEACH MANY OTHERS. DAM HOT STORY BE THE WAY WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

one of the coolest stories here.