Posted by eric it cant end there???? please
Posted by Marcus Dude, that can't be the end. That was the worse ending for such a wonderful story. You have to make a part 5 to this. I was dissapointed.
Posted by me This sucks. I liked the first to ones, but hey! they are together now. At least some hot, loving sex. Come on. What happened with Todd? When did they kiss, hug and cry? This is the worst ending ever.
Posted by Justin Words can't even describe how angry I am.
Posted by Seymour okay, okay. I get it! That's what happens when I try and rush a story.
Posted by dwc Well, like they all said, it's the worst ending ever and is truly disappointing. c'mon! i was expecting a really nice ending for this story. so are you gonna make part 5 or just leave it like that? i was actually wondering how you're gonna continue the story since for what seemed to be the climax already happened in part 2 or 3. so i was waiting for part 5 but then you ended the story so quick. i want part 5!!!...lol
Posted by me again Even if he makes a part 5, it is not necessary to edit/delete this story. They didn't even kiss. So this can pass as another chapter, and then you end it in a correct way.
Posted by Eric k, You can"t jus end it like that. u gotta write another part. You gotta give it a proper ending.
Posted by Seymour Cox THE FINAL, FINAL CHAPTER IS ALMOST COMPLETE. I WILL SUBMIT IT TONIGHT 5/10/05 THANKS SEYMOUR COM
Posted by Marcus Where is the final? You said you would post it 5/10 and it's 5/11.
Posted by seymour cox submitted 3 days ago, still under reviwe
Posted by FUNKY BUTTLOVER THIS IS A GRATE STORY!!
Posted by gidi disapointing end
Posted by Ayden Not all stories have to end with sex. I thought this story was adorable and now cant wait for the "end". or is it?
Posted by Andre If not the best story on the net so far then none are. Great story and excellent gendre. Hope something similar would be available soon. Couldnt stop till I finished all of this and have to admit that there is allot of heart here. thanx
Posted by Jasper wow that is brilliant . I'm crying now LOL
Posted by willy my godyou need to have this published lol
Posted by David A I love it but plezz try to finish it it would b awsome same here jasper XD its so sad at the start then got realy realy happy in part 2/3 so this hole storie is booked marked lol And come on its 19/5/09 hurry up plezzz Love David A
Posted by Brad :
who died? when i read about the gravestone i burst out in tears! please don't say scotty :(
but you should do more stories like this! i couldn't stop reading it, it's like, amazing. thankyou
Posted by Me Part 5 whould be good?