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Posted by eric
it cant end there???? please
Posted by Marcus
Dude, that can't be the end. That was the worse ending for such a wonderful story. You have to make a part 5 to this. I was dissapointed.
Posted by me
This sucks. I liked the first to ones, but hey! they are together now. At least some hot, loving sex. Come on. What happened with Todd? When did they kiss, hug and cry? This is the worst ending ever.
Posted by Seymour
okay, okay. I get it! That's what happens when I try and rush a story.
Posted by dwc
Well, like they all said, it's the worst ending ever and is truly disappointing. c'mon! i was expecting a really nice ending for this story. so are you gonna make part 5 or just leave it like that? i was actually wondering how you're gonna continue the story since for what seemed to be the climax already happened in part 2 or 3. so i was waiting for part 5 but then you ended the story so quick. i want part 5!!!...lol
Posted by me again
Even if he makes a part 5, it is not necessary to edit/delete this story. They didn't even kiss. So this can pass as another chapter, and then you end it in a correct way.
Posted by seymour cox
submitted 3 days ago, still under reviwe
Posted by FUNKY BUTTLOVER
THIS IS A GRATE STORY!!
Posted by gidi
disapointing end
Posted by Ayden
Not all stories have to end with sex. I thought this story was adorable and now cant wait for the "end". or is it?
Posted by willy
my godyou need to have this published lol
Posted by Brad
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