Posted by rick great story so far. keep it coming.
Posted by Jeff Damn, this story is really interesting, I can't wait for part 4. I think you are a brilliant writer, keep it up!
Posted by me awwwww i love it! 3
Posted by dwc Nice and interesting story...it's so great!
Posted by Marcus AHHHHHH! OMFG! Yes, they are finally back together. Whoa, I can't wait for the 4th chap. Please update soon. We would all appreciate it. Great job so far. You're on the road to be the next Micheal Booker.
Posted by crybaby damn! that almost had me crying as hard as when i read the first Ch. of your "David & Matthew story on the other site. i would never tell you how to write but can i suggest writing 2 parts the size you normanky do and posting both a one part.
Posted by aaron omg **tear** u know theres only one story that made me stop and reflect after reading it and that story was all about love now your story makes number two. good job and thanks
Posted by jon jeez! part 3 was better then 1 & 2
Posted by jon mother fudger! okay, i cried like a baby over this chapter......
Posted by Franklin omg this story made me cry i loved it!
Posted by Logan I wanted to cry but I couldn't. This story really hit something inside of me and I want to thank you for that.
Posted by gidi nice story his answer is missing and what happened later
Posted by Jac I fell in love with story. I felt the story with my heart and I was crying.
Posted by Supa the story could have just ended here or continue to a 4th chapter but whatever u decide to do ..... u r a f*%4ing great writer !
Posted by Monty OMG. This was great...I cant even explain how great I though this was....it was....GREAT. You have no idea. Im gonna print this...I love it.
Posted by choppy Great Story, I actually almost started crying. Just amazing...
Posted by david This storie is the best storie in my life .i made me cry,and happy. I wish i could find me a great friend like that. im just going in to high school.im just coming out and like it not 4 the sex but 4 the bf*s.
Posted by willy oh my god i love these storys they made me ball lol umm if you make anymore please let me know thank you your a amazing wrtier and i hope to hear about a sequal
Posted by zack Wow that was a fucking amazing story now u should make the movie...lol
Posted by Romeo I really love this story. I almost started to cry but had to stop myself!
Posted by Sanyu That was the best story ever, it was perfect, just great. Wish I could have a love story like that. But I turned away from the guy that loved me like that, sure we went out for about six months; but then I just broke his heart and left. We broke up in Feb. , he still loves me though but I sorta can't deal with the fact of being with a guy. With some of my family being around and saying it's wrong; while the rest don't know and would look at me differently and look down on me. Also I want to be famous and I don't think I want to be gay and the world knowing it. So many people say I'm a good kid and they like me, and don't want that to change. Plus I'm involved in my church; so with that and being gay is really contradicting, so I don't know. That guy loves me and I miss him a bit; but also there are so many girls I like at my school. But in the end it all comes down to me I have to choose: either to not care what people think or to live in the shadows of fear the rest of my life... O_O wow I sure did write a lot, just nonstop haha ^_^ well it's true!
Posted by Mark Sanyu,were just in the same case,a lot of people saying that they will be disgusted if i will let myself to be with a guy,they were expecting me to have a family and in fact that i am the only sibling who has a dick and the rest were pussy,and some saying that i should follow what my brain and heart says,im really confused what to follow,!i want to live without hiding something,'i want to follow my will but people keeps me not to! This is very hard to live with these kind of life!i don't think if i can deal with this,.'..'..,and to the story,it really made me cry,how i wish to have that story too,to the writer of this,i think ur brilliant and smart,u just captivated the heart of the readers especially like us,just keep up the good work,and improve ur talent that u have,.'with ur talent,u can able to make a movie(love story).,broke back mountain is good,but i think ds story is better,.and soon to be the best!
Posted by Mark Sanyu,were just in the same case,a lot of people saying that they will be disgusted if i will let myself to be with a guy,they were expecting me to have a family and in fact that i am the only sibling who has a dick and the rest were pussy,and some saying that i should follow what my brain and heart says,im really confused what to follow,!i want to live without hiding something,'i want to follow my will but people keeps me not to! This is very hard to live with these kind of life!i don't think if i can deal with this,.'..'..,and to the story,it really made me cry,how i wish to have that story too,to the writer of this,i think ur brilliant and smart,u just captivated the heart of the readers especially like us,just keep up the good work,and improve ur talent that u have,.'with ur talent,u can able to make a movie(love story).,broke back mountain is good,but i think ds story is better,.and soon to be the best!
Posted by Hawk Lyra fucking pro :) The todd sex part was great so now if you have a scotty sex scene, its gonna have to be Jizztastic. The emotions in this story are portrayed perfectly, and the spin from not really caring about Todd to loving him and now hating him is pure genius. It takes a ton of skill to pull that off.
Posted by Joe Mark Im in a very similar situation.
Posted by albsexy WOW I have just had to clear the tears from my eyes so as i can write this note that was brill please keep writting your a natural thanks
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