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Ask Me No Questions - Revised End Part 2 of 2 reviews

Posted by me
ok this is cool, but it is still too weak. well, not too much; just weak.
Posted by jon
i don't care what others say. the story as a whole was awesome! parts 1 and 3 where my favs though, you a very good writer!
Posted by Travy
I like the way that you wirte all of the story is good! it is i love all of it keep writing
Posted by Jason
Amazing. Just fucking amazing. I love you see more cocks :P
Posted by jimmy
hey dude ur an osm writer i loved every part of it! thanks alot for writing it and plz write more!
Posted by Nick
im glad u rewrote the end but i could tell u did it cuz of what peps wrote. You are a good writer and though i havnt read all of your stories yet the ones that i have made tears come pouring out at certain points. its soooooooo sad, but then happy and then sad again. Your stories are like Quintin Terintino movies how they go back and forth in time and how you write stuff that means one thing at the time you read it but then makes total sense later on in the story. That's soooooooo awesome how you do that!!! and you seem to be getting better at it, but I also noticed how you haven't written any new stories in a rael long time. How come? pleeze write more cuz I keep checking every so often but no new seymour cox stories. Hahaha! I like the pen name see more cocks, I get it! I want more though. write more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze!!!!
Posted by choppy
Again......wonderful. You are a great writer dont ever stop
Posted by matthias
this was one of the best stories i have ever read....i was disappointed when i thought it had ended a while ago...and relieved when it picked back up....aww such a sweet sweet story...i am not a fan of love at all...but maybe if it would have happened like this i would feel differently!
Posted by kirsten
make more of these plz
Posted by jingle
the ending could have been a little bit better but still good.keep writing
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