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Posted by Bradley
I loved It. I like how a old friend came in the picture and the love affair cant wait for the next part.
Posted by Avery
very good strt im very interested now
Posted by james
Nice story- could be an excellent series.
My only peice of constructive criticism is some of the spelling- some of it is correctly spelled, but the wrong word. For example:
"in gulfed" instead of 'Engulfed'
And there are some other mistakes and typos eg 'teh'.
Perhaps get someone else to proofread the next one? It just makes it easier to read.
Hope this helps
Posted by Devilboy
I cant wait for the next one, I think this will be a fantastic series.
Posted by Han
same as james dude.
i like the story line, just the spelling and proofing.
but keep writing! it seems good so far.
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