I'm not sure if you are turning this into a story with other chapters. I don't think so. But it's cool anyway.
Posted by Michael Booker 3/4s of this story was great, but the last fourth kind of died down; the sex scene could have been extended, and the ending fell flat a little. Overall, I nice story
Posted by CURTIS THAT WAS VERY HOT AND I ENJOYED IT. IT WAS ROUGH YET ROMANTIC ALL AT ONCE. GOOD JOB..
Posted by jon jr Very moving, yet hot at the same time. Loved it! Two snaps up seymour.
Posted by Chris This was a great story. It's also got some really funny one-liners. I'm USING that "payback is a bitch" line, because it can't be relegated to a webpage. Hope the two princes lived happily ever after...
Posted by Jim that was a real hot story, thankx
Posted by Joe That was so cute!
I love your writing... probably my favourite author on this site.
Posted by Romeo I loved it. The sexual actibities could have been extended more and you could have ended the story if that was the ending. Are any of these stories going to be ended?