Posted by Cris Yes please do continue
Posted by Mike still hot man keep up the great adventure
Posted by joshsanchez i like the set up but you really make these chapters really short. just put some more background info. and maybe more about their personal struggles with the whole situation man
Posted by Phillip Seriously the stories are a bit too short. i hope the next one is a bit longer than this one.the story sounds intriguing because of the european settings and plus it is a love story which is rare to find here.
continue man,but add a bit of sex to it.
Posted by JM good story, just make it a little longer with a lil drama.
Posted by Andie oh noo.. just after 5 sentences school was over? i liked the first part better. plot seems to fade away right now..
but good luck with the european trip thing
Posted by Mendez I agree with Andie. You should have written more about the school. But I don't think the plot is fading away. I like the idea of the world trip thing. Desperately waiting for the second part just one more thing, write longer and add more sex to it!!