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Posted by Darkblue
Well, I liked it, the story gave great imagination, so good job. Yes, theres a down side, I just thought it would be great if you added to the story, It was perfect, but short,just as it got to a great part, you sort of just stoped it...i mean..what happened, did the brother know Rabbits secret?
Posted by aly
well ,the story was so nice i realy liked it but its too short and i need to know the rest of the story i guess
Posted by Evan
give it up, the story blew
Posted by Amanda Sykes
Thank you very much for your pig headed opnion Evan. I want you to tell me exactly WHY my story blew, otherwise you can shut your damn mouth.
Posted by Chris
I agree w/ you Amanda people need to tell authors why their stories "blow." Personally I thought the story was awesome. I'm getting tired of having to read all these stories where the characters have sex thirty seconds into it and then end. It's true however, the story was kind of short. It would be great if you added to it a little. Like tell us about how rabbit's comming out to his brother affects their relationship in the long run. Does it end up meaning that carrot no longer wants rabbit comming into his bead for comfort or will everything be ok with them forever? You could also tell your readers about a future person that carrot is able to love just as moch if not more that his brother. Great story though! : )
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