Posted by Ashley So... were is the 2nd part of the story?Oh, I think that was a great story.
Posted by KnotsKie this is really great. if only i can find someone whose going to be my friend and at the same whose going to be there to give me pleasure, i will never try to give him up.
Posted by James pretty bad reading.. the person should have taken the time to spell-check.. Hard to follow, and grammar is rough..meaning no sense can be made by some of the sentences. a definite thumbs down
Posted by PACO did you guys hook up?
Posted by Alex Yes!Yes!yes! I love this story very good.Its got taste and spunk.
Posted by Alex So freakin what! you can keep up with it.you just c an't read. unno nuh easy! and who ever it sucked freak you!!
Posted by Ayden I have to agree with James up there. A tip of advice- at least try to fix up some of the words before submitting another story. Its rather distracting. You cant tell where you are going with the plotline.
Posted by marvin Good
Posted by Andy hmmmmm great story, I wanna know more !!
An erotic mystery with a twist.
Larry pays an out of hours visit to mechanic Palmer's garage - he isn't there. Then, from a gangway above his head Larry hears an ominous sound!
Ramfus smiled with fiendish delight as his henchman forced his sizeable cock back into young Lance’s shit hole! The screams coming from Lance was like music to his ears and it excited him right down to his black soul. For a lad of nine and ten summers, he couldn’t stand to much pain...
