Posted by me What the fuck is this?????????? I could only get to the first sentence then stopped. Can't understand what is going on and who is saying/doing what.
Please try reading your story before submitting it. Where is the grammar, fullstops, speech marks, etc?
Posted by rob Complete rubbish. This is no story. Just words put together that don't make sense
Robbie squeezed his eyes shut and slowly started to relaxe as the burning sensation subsided. “I-I-I want you to make love to m-me…NOW!”
“As…you…wish!”...