Posted by josh this is great I hope you write the second part soon!
Posted by josh this is great I hope you write the second part soon!
Posted by wow500 I love love love it;0
please right more. don't make me have to get on my knees and...beg.LOL
Posted by MHSasko This story line is fantastic.... just marvelous. Your style of writing would make a fantastic Short Film and if it was on the Click List on LOGO I would have to vote for it. This part is capable of standing alone but I am looking forward to the continuing saga. These situations can go either direction and I hope you put the same thought and realism to the next part if you decide not to let this piece stand alone. Thank You!