Posted by sixkiddad Real nice story. I hope you keep it going.
This brings back so many memories of my past I can tell you it could have been my life. I wish I had been stronger but then again those were different times. As you can tell by my name.
Posted by Mike A totally amazing story - tender and heartfelt!!! Please let us know more of what happens to these two young guys.
Posted by Seymour Cox I can almost cry everytime I read that story and I wrote. I'm such a "Sissy La La" as Bobby would say. Thank you for the encouragement to continue. Charles a.k.a Chico Pen Names: Chico Brisbane & Seymour Cox
Posted by Ger Dunne so excellently written - reminds me very much of the circumstances surrounding my encounter with my first love all tose years ago. More please!
Posted by pat that story sent shivers up my spine. i know how it feels to live like that. i am 20, and until three months ago, i lived with a housemate who was also the love of my life, although he didn't know that. except for our days at work, every moment was spent together, and now that i don't see him (live to far away, don't want to seem like i'm putting in too much effert to see him! sad as shit), i feel i will never have that again! i know now that i will always have that, just as you have your memories. i do think that i will call him now, though, considering that our feelings may have been shared!
Posted by jon Crap! this story made me cry! i like the way they it went from a like narrative into a story. and how they subjects have "private thoughts" awesome way of writing it! This was an amazing story!
Posted by Rod yikes! i luv this story!
Posted by J.a.s. for me, I was 15 (I'm now 18). and your right, love doesnt strike like lightning... the sad thing is that for me, i didnt realize the love between us until he moved away... even worse, i know that it could have been love for ever, and though he isnt very far, i have no way of finding him. nothing hurts more than losing love before you have a chance at it.
Posted by Maxwell i too loved this story very very much. it had me intrigued through the entire read
Posted by me wow!!!!!!! ok so you made me cry. thank you i really needed that
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Posted by jerrycom wow! - thought provoking
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Posted by angel that was beautiful
Posted by theo oh my god. its so beautiful. as i write this im crying. I am sixteen and i am absolutely and irrevocably in love with my friend. We do notes in between classes and joke all the time about how the other must be gay. When i look in his eyes i feel warm and every trouble seems to go away. I once lied about the blow up mattress so we would be in the same small bed, and i 'accidentally' put my arm around his chest and my head snuggled in his armpit over the night after he fell asleep. i am too scared to ask him out... the sun rises and sets with him and id do anything for him. I have had the same thoughts run through my head, about how if only he would come out first. i have practiced some hundred times how to come out to him. i dont want to loose what he have now if it goes wrong..
Posted by Romeo That was one of the most beatiful story I read on the cite! I'm also inlove with one of my friends but can't tell him and don't think I ever can.
I'm to protective of my heart! I been through so much pain in my life that I can't tell anyone my secrets and protect my heart at all time!
Posted by daniel this story was just beautiful..brought tears to my eyes
Posted by albsexy That was so sexy and gave me a few memories thanks