Posted by Mike Total SHIT - not even worth rating as a 1.
Posted by Joe You just took the script for the Charmed pilot...and changed the names...wtf is that?
Posted by Jacen Solo Umm yea that was strange to say the least. And why is it on this site? Ok yea the guy was like bi or something but that's about it. Basically it sucks. And could you possibly have more typos in it? Jesus, it's called spell check.
Posted by Romeo Very funny,I was laughing through half of it! I hope it be more chapters with sexual descriptions.
You need to check your spelling and grammer though.
Don't worry about ripping off a story because just about all the stories on this cite is a rip off from another story but the readers isn't complaining about those.
When a man can have any other person he wishs, he finds one that he would trade it all away for, and their darkest secrets are brought forth, and it only brings them closer together...
The fall of 1943 was a beatiful, warm season... Then November came, and Paul got a call from Herr Koch, Will's superior officer. "I must see you... it's urgent", Herr Kock said... "Something happened"