Posted by Seymour Cox Great story just a little hard to follow on one huge paragraph. But still hot
Posted by Screaminghawk Santanas I'm no judge but a little quick??
Posted by Ayden Awww...how romantic. I loved it.
Posted by Romeo Not bad but it looks like you were trying to cram alot of time into 1 page. Spread the time of events out, it would make your writing better. I like to read longer stories rather than shorter stories.
It just seems like everything happened to quick, including the sex.
Posted by Ian Bayly Guys,
This too is a lovely story & yes I'm jealous as hell
as I really wish I was in love & remain in love with another man.Maybe one of these days really soon it may happen for me also.I certainly hope so.Anyway I wish the both of you all the best for your future together.
Posted by Mike at Maywood A wunnerful story! I can relate to this story alot.
Posted by daniel nice! made me cum in my boxers