Posted by Mario Thats' Hot
Posted by Greg Dude, I had no idea what the hell was going on. When writing your story take the time and read it through afterwards.
I couldn't make heads or tails of what was goin on, slow down dude.
Posted by Nick LMFAO!!!! GREAT STORY!! coulda made the sex scene a little hotter but ill leave the rest to my imagination tonight ;) and the ending was fu*king hilariouse!! keep it up dude! BRAVO! and keep it up!!
Posted by Seymour Cox Thanks nick, I smoked a fatty around the time that I wrote the end. Not sure where all that came from and didn't remeber writing that gas station bit until I read it back just now. That's pretty wild man! Late, Seymour
Posted by Jon Whats up with that ending, it's f'ing hysterical! Lay off the fatty's. you do much better without them.
I read and love all of your stories.
Posted by Romeo I love your story. The ending was hot and wild. You did move it a little fast though.