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Posted by Jake Very nice story. Very descriptive. I like how its put together, can't wait for the next installment. Thanks again!
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I was just eighteen, fresh out of high school when I landed my first real job working for a small construction company. The work required me to spend a lot of time away from home, which was a new and exciting experience...