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Posted by Trigger
You twisted asshole. That beginning teaser was FUCKED UP! The moment after I read the story description, it started pouring outside of my house, but there were no clouds at all. It was as if the entire world was going to END! (I am actually yelling right now) Rain with no clouds, Ethan DYING, Woody not dating ETHAN, that's just FUCKED UP! But then alas, everything was PERFECT, perfect story, you knew right away what was going to happen but you gave a more brilliant display of words and emotions then one should ever have to endure! I am BEGGING you to please write about Reed and Adam. I will do you college work if you promise to write more, you have to write more. Again, best story EVER written!
Posted by Vasquez
Good ending. Great series. Its better than that another world crap that you wrote. But now that finals are over and winter break is here it looks like you can finally get some rest. Look forward to your next venture.
Posted by Stephen
just to let you know, I LOVED THIS SERIES!!! u have a great talent and i hope u keep writing!!.
*i'm writing a series of books, and i can tell that if you tried, you could be an EXCELLENT writer.
Posted by Sebastien
LOL. yes, that teaser was unnecessary, but i do like to have some fun story description. and hopefully that would get more people's attention.
good news for anyone who cares, i'm in the process of writing the first chapter for the spinoff series involving Reed and Adam. i'll try to have rough drafts of at least 3 chapters before i post anything on here. so that may be a while.
Posted by Daniel
Great Story. I hope that in your effort to expose Reed and Adam, that our favorite couple get some time in their story.
Posted by vwbug
yes yes yes i would love a story about adam and reed. i would also like you to finish another world. ;)
Posted by P.Rivers
Great job...its was a fun story to follow. i look foreward to more of your work. keep it up!
Posted by John
I have loved your stories from the first to the last, and would love to read a spinoff. I love how much detail and prescision you put into your stories. But I did find one thing amiss. On the fourth page (of number 9) starting with : “Oh, shit! I did, didn’t I? I’m soooo sorry.” Ethan gasped, biting his lips and curling his toes, “But please, for Christ’s sake, Woody…let me come.” through the first time break he said that he called him woody at the courthouse but did'nt mention that he just called him woody. But then again nobody is perfect and you did an AMAZING job! ;)
Posted by Sebastien
thanks for catching that, i can easily edit it.
Posted by adnan
hell yeah. d the spinoff n make it a really mushy love story i`m a sucker 4 mushy love stories
Posted by Ares
I love this story so much, it took me forever to read cause of work and skool and all that, but i thought about it all the time. I misread some parts so i thought Ethan really was about to die when he disappeared and i thought about it for about 3 days, cause i was afraid to read it. I would hope you write more. thanks
Posted by JakeH.
ok im 15 and dont read much but this story line/series is the best I have ever read! WAY TO GO! 100/10
Posted by Shane S
This story was amazing. Its 6 am I've been unable to sleep untill I finished reading. I'm always so sad when such a great story comes to a close. Thank you so much for your time and amazing imagination, keep up the superb work!
Posted by jimmy
idk. maybe adam nd reed would b good. but im gonna miss sherwood and ethan...
Posted by kamaki
awesome piece of work, I enjoyed reading every word
Posted by Sherwood Allen Anderson
Sebastien,I am a thirteen y.o. kid who loves this kind of stories.Im begging you write more stories.If u want to know,the kind of story i like is long,emotional and full of love.When I read the plot of the final chapter,my heart skipped two beats and i swear i cried knowing that Ethan would die and i kinda hated u 4 that.But please continue writing.By the way my email is
smd_1011@yahoo.com
Posted by Jimmy
WHEN R U GONNA WRITE THE SPINOFF!!!
Posted by Brandon
Holy shit. I think this is the sweetest, and best story I've read on this website. You're a great author and I personally would absotivelyposolutely LOVE a spin off with Adam and Reed. Its pure genious!
Posted by Cherrie
I completely enjoyed reading the story of Ethan and Woodys love.The way things unfolded I found realistic and was entranced from the beginning to the very end! I hope you keep writing!...I do hope that you write a spin off for Adam and Reed and I have *fingers crossed* that Ethan and Woody will make an appearance to give us an update on their love and marriage!
Cherrie
Posted by Romeo
I really love this series! I glad happiness came to all four guys. One of the few best series on this cite.
I hope you make a spin off with Adam and Reed with some appeearences from Ethan and Sherwood.
Keep writing dude! We nee more emotional, sexual, exciting stories from.
Posted by matthew oshea
that was great your mind works wonders with a pen bring on adam and reed
Posted by Dale
Ummmm, WOW!!!XD. This is such a great series!!! I'm a 15 year old and this series was just exqusite!!! You are a great writer. I want to see a spin off with Adam and Reed, but please have Sherwood and Ethan make appearences. I would like to know how their marrige is going!!!XD.
Posted by Montana
Soo amazing it was so heart felt and sexy I al.ost didnt wana finish reading
Posted by Peter
Yo man i truely gt this story i conected with the characters since the begining i know you said this is the last chapter but dear god you just have to do a story on wheather they actually tie the not i used to love reading but my when my eyes got so weak i can barely see at night i lost my luster for reading you are an awesome author ill read ur other stories but tell you the truth cool fools will always have my heart go well mwah p
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