Posted by Hyatt Ando Please write more!
Posted by Eddy Naw men i want to here more ur one of the best ones i have ever read if u have any o ther stories sent me a mesge a d . eduardovargastyu@email.com
Posted by jon hey finish tis story plees it was reely good
Posted by jon i love it
Posted by jon i love it. want more.
Posted by nathan wow just wow
Posted by Raider This is actually pretty good. Please write a part 2. In fact write until you think the story needs to be finished. I like this story a lot. You got some talent. Keep it up.
Posted by Nic It was really good.. And helarius.. Haha.. Hope that you are gonna post part 2.. Cant wait.. :)
Posted by Jack Do a part 2
Posted by nektarios please do a part 2 plz plz lol ur actually really good and its about time this site had another love story:):):):)
Posted by Doug It was actually an amazing beginning to what could be an awesome story. Hope you'll continue the series. Also as a tip, be sure if you do continue not to drag out unnessasary things that could make your readers lose interest. Good job again and keep it up! :D
Posted by vikram its awsum write next part
Posted by Pat Great story, loved it!
Posted by Todd Great story! got me rock hard! awesome! MORE MORE MORE!
Posted by vernon Good story
Robbie squeezed his eyes shut and slowly started to relaxe as the burning sensation subsided. “I-I-I want you to make love to m-me…NOW!”
“As…you…wish!”...