Posted by Steven Your have a good story line there ;) only thing I would pick up on is to check for some grammar mistakes :) also near the end you losethe descriptive side of the story which helped me actually picture the story :) so during the whole sex part you should put more decription so people could picture it more! But overall bot bad ;D keep writing
I reached around and felt a big thick cock. I rubbed my hand over the head of his cock where precum was generously oozing from his piss slot. I bent over further and guided his prick into the first stage of my anus, then he took control and eased the remaining cock deep into my ass. It was very thick around and I felt him stretching my insides. I gasped as he gripped my buttocks and pulled me back further on his hard cock. It felt awesome...