Crush reviews

Great story. Keep writing.

aww thats such a sweet story, based on real life?

hey! great story, I wanted to wait, but I came before I even finished the story! I hope you write more

Really good story good job!!! Nice and smooth

Very nice!

Since people asked, it's very loosely based on real life. Tiel is obviously me, and I made Jack to look like one guy and act like another. If it had worked out with either, it would have been awesome, but as life goes, the best ones are always straight.

iLOVED THIS AND WANT IT AND MORE to read by my lonly nights amando