Posted by Mikey A good, solid tale. Good choice of dialogue. I felt like I was seeing it happen. I could almost feel the heat of the water and the smell of soap. You brought me into their world man. Keep up the good story telling and kudos for NOT telling a wham-bam-thank-you-man story.
Posted by Chip Thanks so much man! I personally love hot jocks, hot studs, and spying coaches all at once! Great storytelling and I love the dialogue like Mike said. Hearing a guy moan is one of my fetishes. If someone could convey it better, I woulda cum even more! Thanks again! Keep it up dude!
Posted by Jordan Oh fuck man, you just made me squirt my load all over without touching myself! Reading this story alone made me horny as hell! You gata write more about these three hot fuckers!
Posted by Ruud van Tintelen Hoi Christian Langley,
A realy good story!
Thanks, whaiting for the other part!
Posted by TheLoneReviewer This story is one about the stories that we wished were true in the locker room. I for one felt that i was actually in that same shower as the three young men. The story was brilliantly crafted and executed. Not only getting my full attention, but the details of which were all too perfect. I give this story ***** out of *****. Perfect, keep up the great work.
Posted by zeke hey i loved your story do you have msn?
if you do my msn is zeke18th@hotmail.com
i really want to talk to you
Posted by irish hi man it was so hot i blew my load allover my self love to talk.
Posted by Syning Oh damn this story was hot as hell and if anyone wants to chat my email is lordrecluse1000@hotmail.com
Posted by Romeo Nice story!
I want to see Todd and Jake double team Erin. How about letting Todd pop Jake cherry. That would be great, having two best friends pop each other cherry!
Posted by Karl hey, i loved your story. it was one of the best i've read yet. do you have a facebook? just email me the answer at karl6736@comcast.net
Posted by Boy Feet Lover ;) So Fuckin Hot. I really like the detail you went into, about their ripped bodies.. ;)