Posted by kaell noooooo why did it have to end there next part coming soon?
Posted by Michael Sheridan Excellent beginning! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Posted by vatsan the story was really heart ripping , if it is a real story im truly happy for u ;) i really liked it it touched me in the core. thanks
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Posted by nektarios aww come on that was a tease pllz post more or i'll have 2 beg everyday till theres not a new one
Posted by kale thats so good i really liked it keep writing
Posted by kiser i agree w nektarios plzz write more
Posted by nektarios tehe oopsss i mean till there iss a new one haha i loved it typo
Posted by Lima I heart happy endings...it is happy, yea?
Posted by josh that was pretty damn good. would love to read more!
Posted by Dillion that was an amazing story! in some ways i can relate to it but with me its my mom that was on my side nd not my dad. i cant wait to read more! :)
Posted by Mark Excellente amigo! I will never get tired of reading and waiting for every part of your heart touching story,.i know that sex will be there but keep the story long before sex comes out,keep touching our heart till to its bttm,i agree to all those comments that mentioned above my other readers,keep it up dude,i can relate to ds.
Posted by Fernando Loved it can't wait for the next part ......p.s. is this real