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Posted by DetentionLover
Nice Story.. no sex involved, but seriously didn't need it, i hate reading any type of book, but surprisingly i like your stories michael, not just cuz it's erotic fiction... that always helps but your stories are just great, lots of detail and human emotion. This one is one of the best, well worth the wait... hopefully we don't have to wait as long for the next detention, though i know you're busy in life and writing secrets as well... really don't want this to end at 15. but thxs for writing a good story for us, and all stories come to an end, so i hope you have good beginning, middle and end.. you definately have the beginning and middle... cheers mate
Posted by Brianna
Every time you write another story if gets better. I don't know how this is possible. These stories like I tell you all the time is great. Please don't stop anytime soon. If you need to take your time. But you would be disappointing alot of readers. Many people come on this site now just to read the detention series. You are a great writer, and you need to keep posting these stories. If you can get people to read stories with no sex in it on this site. You are truely a gifted man.
Posted by ~AFAN~
I freaking love your stories there is so much drama and emotion and this is real life quality. I can't get enough of them I have checked every day waiting for 11 and I am not disappointed. Its great and I will be checking every day for 12. Thanks so much for all these great stories you provide. Keep it up.
Posted by kai
i loved it i gave it a ten..........PLEASE dont stop the series at 12 ppppppppllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeee
Posted by Cod
Excellent,magnificent,fantastic!It worthed waiting!You certainly know how to manipulate the story and get the best of it!
We have an angry, bitter, mean, hurtful, vengeful and vindictive Brandon as any brokenhearted guy expected to be!He begins to “play” with Luke just to see how upset Chris would get,only to make Chris jealous and angry!He manages to succeed it the best way possible.What begins though as a play seems to get serious in the process!The more closely he notices Luke,the more he appreciates him and the more stimulated and aroused gets by him!Yet although it’s getting more and more difficult for Brandon he manages to repulse the temptations and remain faithful to his love for Chris,albeit he conciders Chris doesn’t deserve this,especially the way he treat him.How long will he be able to stand against those temptations succesfully?Since he’s never been with a guy like Luke (hairy and uncut) before,it would be quite interesting to watch Brandon move in on with Luke,so as to clarify the possibility to get over Chris (inexistent I’m afraid,the one and only way to discover it though) and on the other hand to countervail Chris’reactions.
As for Chris,he fails to comprehent the seriousness of the situation he’s responsible for.The easy excuse for him is that Brandon “moved on to some other dude that quick”.This though doesn’t make him less upset or lealous!He feels threatened and this feeling gets more and more intense,unsettling and worst.His opponent doesn’t seem to be an easy one;Luke appears to be more handsome and muscular than him,at least in Brandon eyes,who gets more and more captivated and stimulated by Luke,while Chris becomes unnoticed in the presence of Luke.He has to act soon:He admits he wants Brandon,while Brandon the day before confirmed that he loved him.He insists on focusing on the physical and external aspect of their relationship,while Brandon seeks for the internal.He fails to comprehent the consequences of his mistake.He orders and threatens Brandon not to “fuck” Luke.Why not to get involved with,or even love him and simply not to fuck him?The answer has to do with Chris’ perspectives:he doesn’t believe in love,he only knows (so far) the physical and external aspect on a relationship and most important for one thing he feels confident:Brandon’s love for him.Yet doubts and suspicions begin to overcome him.How will he react?
Luke is the only one that stands up for Brandon,the only one that’s brave to show his interest.In other circumstances he would have been the perfect match for Brandon,but now he becomes Brandon’s stooge just to get even and eventually get Chris back.Poor guy…
By the way would you mind to inform us the reason Luke,Bill,Jason and Scott got detention?That could be quite interesting.
There are going to be 15 torturous and long days up to Detention 12!We’ll try to be as patiend as possible,but Michael please give us the installment the sooner you can and for one more time don’t end Detention nor to 15,neither to…25,but when you won’t have anything more to say,which I strongly believe (and there are many to agree with me) is far far away!Thanks mate,keep up the good work!
Posted by Cod
Excellent,magnificent,fantastic!It worthed waiting!You certainly know how to manipulate the story and get the best of it!
We have an angry, bitter, mean, hurtful, vengeful and vindictive Brandon as any brokenhearted guy expected to be!He begins to “play” with Luke just to see how upset Chris would get,only to make Chris jealous and angry!He manages to succeed it the best way possible.What begins though as a play seems to get serious in the process!The more closely he notices Luke,the more he appreciates him and the more stimulated and aroused gets by him!Yet although it’s getting more and more difficult for Brandon he manages to repulse the temptations and remain faithful to his love for Chris,albeit he conciders Chris doesn’t deserve this,especially the way he treat him.How long will he be able to stand against those temptations succesfully?Since he’s never been with a guy like Luke (hairy and uncut) before,it would be quite interesting to watch Brandon move in on with Luke,so as to clarify the possibility to get over Chris (inexistent I’m afraid,the one and only way to discover it though) and on the other hand to countervail Chris’reactions.
As for Chris,he fails to comprehent the seriousness of the situation he’s responsible for.The easy excuse for him is that Brandon “moved on to some other dude that quick”.This though doesn’t make him less upset or lealous!He feels threatened and this feeling gets more and more intense,unsettling and worst.His opponent doesn’t seem to be an easy one;Luke appears to be more handsome and muscular than him,at least in Brandon eyes,who gets more and more captivated and stimulated by Luke,while Chris becomes unnoticed in the presence of Luke.He has to act soon:He admits he wants Brandon,while Brandon the day before confirmed that he loved him.He insists on focusing on the physical and external aspect of their relationship,while Brandon seeks for the internal.He fails to comprehent the consequences of his mistake.He orders and threatens Brandon not to “fuck” Luke.Why not to get involved with,or even love him and simply not to fuck him?The answer has to do with Chris’ perspectives:he doesn’t believe in love,he only knows (so far) the physical and external aspect on a relationship and most important for one thing he feels confident:Brandon’s love for him.Yet doubts and suspicions begin to overcome him.How will he react?
Luke is the only one that stands up for Brandon,the only one that’s brave to show his interest.In other circumstances he would have been the perfect match for Brandon,but now he becomes Brandon’s stooge just to get even and eventually get Chris back.Poor guy…
By the way would you mind to inform us the reason Luke,Bill,Jason and Scott got detention?That could be quite interesting.
There are going to be 15 torturous and long days up to Detention 12!We’ll try to be as patiend as possible,but Michael please give us the installment the sooner you can and for one more time don’t end Detention nor to 15,neither to…25,but when you won’t have anything more to say,which I strongly believe (and there are many to agree with me) is far far away!Thanks mate,keep up the good work!
Posted by Renee
EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! I can't wait for the 12th installment. This one was even better than I hoped.
I have to admit that at heart I am a hopeless, sappy romantic & I'd really like to see Brandon & Chris get back together. I think that if Chris would just let his guard down & allow himself to love Brandon back, his own self & perspective would change for the better. In a sense, he can't do it on his own, but with Brandon's love & encouragement, he can.
Love the series, Michael! Good job!
Posted by Detention
It's great, but is Jason going to try it again with Brandon now that Chris is gone? It seems like a waste of a character.
Posted by R.C
omg soul touching chapter! y don't stupid chris admit that he loves brandon goddamnit! well if u did, the story wouldn't be that long. i wonder how many test do they have to go through to prove their feelings towards each other. write more more more!
Posted by Lisa
You know, if I have to wait a while for detention 12 to come out, I will. ONLY, if that mean chris and brandon will be together. I don't want them to get to that pint where they do so much to make the other one jelous that they can't go back to how things were. Their relationship makes the story!! This was great, I can't wait for the next one.... P.S. Michael Booker, where are you from???
Posted by mark
awwww so emotional. nearly had me in tears this time. cant wait for 12.
Posted by Cod
Eventually Chris and Brandon will get together!It’s what we expect,what we demant,what we wish for,all those fool romantics that keep visiting this site,only to read over and over again this truly magnificent story,anxiously waiting its installment.Yet this isn’t gonna happen nor so easy,neither too quickly!Chris doesn’t deserve Brandon and his love,since he refuses to abort his “fucked up” attitude and perspective!Stubborn and stupid,arrogant and selfish,possessive and demander he remains!Furthermore he abstains to even speek to Brandon and most important to defend and stand up for him,while he rushes to inform his jock-buddies that he ended his story with Brandon!Not even a hind of remorse or repentance!And in this point tempting Luke shows up,extremely attractive in Brandon eyes,who although for the time being stays faithful,gets more and more captivated,stimulated and enthralled by him.Chris for sure feels angry and jealous,seriously threaten that he’s about to lose...well…the best sex-partner he’s ever had!His words:”you know I want you… , don’t fuck him… seem to simply comfirm that!He doesn’t and won’t allow himself to see Brandon deeper than this,nor he’ll admit and express his true feelings towards him.Brandon suspected that and now he witnesses it with his own eyes,so their reconciliation draws away.How this is gonna happen,we’ll about to see in the next episodes,many I hope!
I think a good wrighter is prooven from the details.I really enjoyed the pun with Luke’s lust name Block- Blockhead cumming from Chris’ mouth,just to point his major jealousy and annoyance over Brandon’s newfound and rapidly increased interest towards Luke.Keep up the good work mate!Thanks
Posted by mtboi
A Perfect l0 again! Thank you so much for detention. I agree with the others please keep writing until their is nothing left to talk about. Please don't end with 15; your a GREAT writer! This isn't about the sex anymore it's about the intense relationship that most of us never have had, but have always wanted.
Posted by jonh
Your stories are all wonderful but the detention series TAKES THE CAKE. I hope and pray the 12 comes out as soon as possible and I'll check every day until it does . keep up the good work your an amazing writer.
Posted by kai
if you do end the serious you should make like a reunion that tells what everyone is doing now that there adults
Posted by aliano
I love these detention stories. They really keep you on the edge of your seat waiting to see what happens next. Man this story would make a great gay mini series.....Can't wait for #12 in the series.
Posted by Henry
Your killing everyone - Please get chris and Brandon back together, AMAZING stories, cannot wait for 12 and more.
Posted by Mike
The best I have ever read on this site. Normaly I dont like stories that dont have sex in them but I love yours. Dentention is so good you could make it into a movie. Waiting for dentention 12 checking every day.
P.S. Dont end it anytime soon!
Posted by Martha
This is a wonderful story I can't wait to read the next chapter. I am hooked on this story could you please let me know when the next chapter comes out?
Posted by paolo marco
wow, another nice one, it's really an absorbing story that's why i can't get enough of it!!!
anywayz... how bout telling us more about chris in the next chapters... bout what goes on with him when brandon's not around(like when he fought with his dad some chapters ago, and maybe we'll find out how fucked up his life really is)... it would be interesting to see what's really going on with chris that brandon doesn't see... (but then again this might ruin the mystery around chris) anyway just a suggestion...
Posted by Steve
I'm from South-Africa and I'm totaly hooked on this story. All my friends love it also.
If you finish with Detention you should write another one. Just tell me what the name is when you do so.
I'm actualy dissapointed when I've finished a chapter and there's no more. Please hurry up with the next chapter, the suspence is killing me.
P.S:You should publish your stories, you'l make millions.
Posted by kumar
This story is really anticipating for the next one, plz make it fast. The way you are teasing us is making me looking for more.
Posted by Renee
I like Paolo Marco's suggestion about unraveling some of the mystery that is Chris. But, being the writer you are, I'm sure you've thought of it. Keep it coming!!! I'd to see this as a short film or feature length film.
Posted by Cod
I’m trying (very hard I must admit) to find a way to engross myself till Detention’s next installment and trust me re-reading the story doesn’t help at all,on the contrary makes the impatience to grow intense and strong!We don’t mean to pressure you though,since the good work needs its time and you haven’t failed us so far!I’m quite certain that the new episode will be even better and fascinating than the previous ones and this my friend won’t be new,nor unexpected,since the story gets every time even fairer!I don’t know how you accomplish that but it’s the plain truth!The unraveling of the mystery that constitute Chris’ character and personality would be extremely intriguing whereas it’ll get us nearer the main star of this story plus it serves our ulterior purpose to delay the proximate ending of the story,giving us more episodes of Detention.The fear that this possibly denature Chris’ persona is illegitimate,invalid and insubstantial,for one and only reason:the way you manipulated the story so far proofs past any doubt that you simply won’t allow it.After all for a good and tallented author such as you this would n’t be a contingency,nor a prospect!It’s only a suggestion though;the story remains yours and always will be!
It’ll be marvelous to see Detention and Secrets in a book and on a movie or mini series!That would be an unquestionable and major success!Keep up the ecxellent work and give us the next episode the sooner you can!
Posted by luke
so so so good i loved it
Posted by Andie Mann
I am fuckin dying to read detention #12!!! Dude you really have a talent for writting some good fucking erotica.I check just about every day to see if #12 is posted yet. Keep writting and I'll keep strokin!
AndieMann
Posted by dan
Just like everyone else else that posted, man, i agree with them. Your such a talented writer, that this series is the only story, i come on this site to read. I continue to check everyday to see if you updated the story. Don't end the story soon, continue as long as possible. There are some series in detention, where no sex even occurs, but the drama builds up, making the suspense just enough to want to read your next detention. Keep continueing the series, take time if you need it, just continue the story. Greatest story i've come across for a long time. Keep the suspence going, being the talented and great writer, you've entertained many thus far, as you can see from the posts and rating. Extend this series to entertain us more, to praise you after, and to keep your mind going with more thoughts for detention.
Posted by Nina
Oh I just love this.Love in thy youth fair maid be bright.So sexy!
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