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Posted by Brianna
That was great. You made me cry, I am so glad they worked it out. I can't believe it's over but want to thank you for giving us this much. I loved this series and your one hell of a writer. Looking forword to you other stories.
Posted by Eric
ive followed this entire series from the beginning, and never in my life (even though its been a short one of only 16 so far:P) have i ever read such a great series of short storries that had such detail both with physical descriptions and mental dialouge/thought proceces. I think almost every one (regardless of race, gender, personality, or background) can connect to some charachter or other in this series.
This story brings out such raw emmotions from within the reader by giving the perfect quintessence of how it feel to truly fall in love and be stuck in it. I personally belive that this story can truly touch everyone that reads it in a strong and incredibly sensational way.
(wow this is the longest review ive ever given. lol)
Posted by James
AHh....that was great..lol
Posted by kai
im crying :( this series so so fuckin good and thank you for these great stories........i loved it
Posted by Mike
omg this series is so good i loved every second of reading it im just sad now that its over!!! Im soo glad chris and brandon got back together you are an amazing writer. BEST STORY EVER!!!!
Posted by Cod
Plain fair and beautiful was the conclusion of this magnificent story,as this story was from the very begining!As expected running through it left me with contradicting emotions:Delight that these two finally realize,accept,admit and confrond their true feelings.That they’re so important for each other,for one and simple reason:they trully love each other so deeply,so fully,so desperately!Yet affliction and melancholy for the telos!Let me chagrin for it!I will write a full review in a few days.For the time being from the bottom of my heart many thanks for the one and only reason:you brought the romance in my life!I find really hard to say anything more!
Posted by Michael Booker
I've finally finished this story. Hopefully people like it (took me four hours to write it - which is irrelevant - kinda). I never thought a story, which I never intended to do a sequel for, turned into a fifteen page story, which is over a hundred pages (word processing pages single spaced) in complete. It's weird that I could write a love story that so many people could appeal to, because I've never been in a relationship myself and never have been in love. I'm usually the person that doesn't like love stories, but this story was different. The idea of this story was very simple and has been done many times (on this site and in general): the shy outsider has an attraction to the popular school jock who turns out the jock feels the same way. I think many people have had strong attractions to people they hate, but at the same time are drawn to, especially in a high school setting. Some people have asked me if this story is based on personal experience. Yes and no. There was a football jock at my school named Chris who I was attracted to but simultaneously hated, but the details in the story are made up completely. I found it surprising that many people seemed to like the story more when there was less sex involved (well that's my theory anyway) and were more interested in the emotional connection between Chris and Brandon. It seemed like so many people had a connection to the characters, which is always great for a writer to know. As I said before, this story is very simple, follows the basic formula of love stories, but at the same time I think it transcends the boundaries of just a simple love story and explores the complexities of human relationships in general. I had only planned to do 5 parts to this story, then 7, then 10, then 12, and finally 15. I didn't run out of ideas for this story - I just felt like I said everything I needed to say about Chris and Brandon and I'm interested in pursuing other story ideas. Thanks to all the readers who supported this story from the beginning and made me continue on with it when I didn't really want to. I think it made me a stronger writer to tell this story (or maybe that's just my self-delusion) but anyway, that's all I have to say. Thanks.
Posted by BookerFan
awesome ending, just what I expected.. Sad that the series is ending.. Now I'm looking forward to Secrets ;)
Posted by skoliy
Michael,
Thank you for such a wonderful series!!! You did connect to me. You are a wonderful writer; I wish I had your talent. Thank you again!!!
Posted by Jon
Words cannot describe it. Loved the series, followed it all the way through. You have some amazing talent.
Posted by Terk
Wow....what a nice way to end this series!
Thank you for sharing your talent/stories to us.
Posted by tyler
excellent ending to an even better story. Well done
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Posted by Dylan
I loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job MICHAEL BOOKER!
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Posted by ......
great, awesome, cool, kool, fantasic, pefect :)
Posted by Todd
This series is one of the best written works I have ever read. This is something that is rare amoung sites such as these, and i woudl thank you for the honor of giving us such a great story. It is something truley amazing! You are one hell of a writer..and you have a gift for portraying emotion, don't ever stop!
Posted by Kat
A good ending to a very good series. What more can I say Michael, but it was a pleasure to read and you got me hooked to this site and all its hidden pleasures. Can't wait to read your next effort, though I must point out that Secrets kinda left us hangin'. THANK YOU & ALL THE BEST.
Posted by Greg
I've been reading these stroes from the beginnig and you really have touched me. I'm in school now and you really captured the essence and the feeling of having the school crush and secret desires. I will miss this series but i'm ok with it because you ended it off good. Thank you for the great and fantasic stories.
Your #1 fan
Greg
Posted by Amish
Michael,
You outdid yourself (if that's possible) each time you began to write the next episode throughout the series. Having joined the crowd of your #1 fans from 7th or 8th episode, I became a regular reader.
This ride of love-hate emotional roller coaster has been exceptionally wonderful. Yes, you're right - we all somewhat hate the person we love and we're attracted to people who we hate at some level!
Detention comes to an appropriate, well-deserved end! Thank you for bringing to us this wonderful love-hate relationship! Everyone can describe meanings of words by synnonyms, but you've skillfully described true meanings of "Love" and "Hate" by defining them in their opposite terms in this series! Really Deep, man! Love ya for that!
You're a great story-teller, writer, author! There are distinct differences in each, and you have them all! You're truly attuned with your abilities to write... I would remain your reader as long as you shall write. I'll come back to agaysex.com time and again to see if you've posted anything new! If you ever have to leave this site, please leave us a clue where we can find you, Deal? Please don't leave this site, though! :)Finally, Thanks to the Team at agaysex.com for appreciating Michael Brooker as much as we all have! You are a great, well-managed site! Bravo!
Posted by Ian K.
Loved it, every single bit of. It was a perfect ending to the perfect story. It was sad to know that it was ending, but with the way it ended, we were left satisfied despite the longing we all feel for the series. It ran its course and you concluded it perfectly! I can't wait for more of the "Secret's" series!
Posted by Ian K.
I forgot to add that I am one person who enjoyed the story more when there wasn't sex involved. In real life, I'm much more of a realist, but when it comes to stories, the romantic aspects and the emotional connections between characters really touch me.
Posted by Carter
Ohhh i've been reading this (though i havn't posted) since the very begining and i loved it SINCE the begining! Very awesome writer. Hmm maybe i can do something like that for school work minus all the sex and... sex hahah. So i'm looking forward to secrets too and i'm sure a lot of other people are too. Don't wanna rush ya but it'll be nice if u gave us a big juicy x-mas present. =)
Posted by lee
damn im still ballin ya'll that was a great story*cries* i need me sum of that lol
Posted by Blu
that was a great series and the ending was awesome.
i loved all of it. :)
Posted by paolo marco
all i can say is detention is a great great great series. thanks michael for sharing it with us. you're a great storyteller. hope there's more to come. the way you get so many people hooked with the story even without sex involved just proves you're great talent and congratulations on being the top author this year!
Posted by J
You are a genius. Fuckin LOVED it!!!!
Posted by steven alexander
i just want to say it was beautiful! the series kept me hard all the way through and the ending gave a wishful high school boy hope. i want to say awesome job and thank you!!
Posted by c.w
i love ur story.. not alot of the stories posted on this website actually haf any emotions attached to them.. u knw how to found the balance n had the ability to combine emotion n sizzlin times.. cheers :)
Posted by Mareck
Great story/series man, i've read all the stories starting from number one and I thought they were all great. Your a great author, your able to describe evreyone of the characters and there emotions with such detail that your actully able to fell the same way there feeling. Also you were able to make this series have just the right amount of emotion and sex, all I know is I hope you make another series soon and I hope it's even better than this one.
Posted by zfdhgbfdbghrfbg
i loved every single part of this story. though i'm sad about it ended... but it ended perfectly.
Posted by evan hapozane
I really love Michael Booker.
Such a great writer... Hope I'll be able to meet him someday!
Keep on writing ok!
Success and happiness always be with you, Mr. Booker!
Posted by ljh
Where do I start? This was the deepest story that I ever read, I actually forgot why I logged on to read it in the first place. I felt so dumb, be cause I must have cried a river. I cried not because the character and their conflict, but because it made me reflect on my life. The story touched me personally, almost like it was written just for me. I am not out openly as being gay,and there is no one that I can talk to. Well let me just say this is something that I needed, even if it does sound strange. It came just in time, when I know that I reached the lowest point in my life both physically and mentally, this was something that really lifted my spirits. So, I am not going to keep punishing myself by worrying about what other people may think of me anymore because you can't please everybody. I am going to take my 20 year old self and just live life day by day. Thanks to you I now know that this pain and loneliness that I feel won't last forever. In a weird way thanks for the advice.
P.S. This is the best story I ever read, probably the best I will ever read. I now feel like the story is mine, very personal, only if you knew. Thank You.
Posted by chris
what a fantastic story. i have only just got my computer & this makes it worth every penny
Posted by Jake
oh god.
I never thouhgt anything that I read could ever make me cry.
I read the whole series and...just plain wow.
great work. you're an amazing author.
Posted by Keller
OMG! What a story!! This should be published...seriously. I mean it's just as if I bought this in a book store! Besides all the sex parts.LOL :)
Posted by Jason
I just love this story! It made me cry! I never thought I could ever read such a good story like this.
Posted by me
this is the third time i read it. never get tired of it.
Posted by Steve
This has been the most moving thing I've read in a very long time. Even the parts with no sex, you had me hooked. I can't say how well done this series was.
Posted by Athan
I finished reading your story a while ago, and just got around to reading all 15 parts at once. I love your writing style. The characters were really easy to relate to, and their situation. I almost hate to see it end, but at least everything is resolved in the ending you provided. Kudos, you're an inspiration to writters everywhere!
Posted by HOT ROD
FABULOUS ,GREAT STORY YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE SERIES LUKE AND SCOTT NEED TO GET TOGETHER.
Posted by Marcus
OMFG, this made me cry so much after finishing it. But I really wanted to see Jason Coleman, and Billy Anderson fuck. I was really waiting for that to happen, but it never did. You described Jason to be a hot, intelligent perfect guy, but we never got to see just how "perfect" he was. C'mon, add a chapter with those two in it. It would be perfect! Anyways, loved the series, and I've been with it since the beginning, but you also need to update on Secrets. That one is almost as good.
Posted by Perryn
I had to admit this was really good, i was expecting this to be just antoher sex story but it was way more than that. It had depth of a real novel, you should seriously condider making a book if your not making one already. I love the ending and I so wish I had your talent. I would never expect to find such a good story on a site like this!
Posted by Dom
That was such a beautiful story.
Posted by Andrew H
I just sat and read all 15 parts of this story and asides from the hardon it gave me thinking about all the guys involved it made me cry at the end when Chris and B made up, especially when Chris finally managed to sat 'I love you,' to B.
Posted by Dani
This was the best rollar coaster ride I've ever been on! I'm a devoted fan! You are an incredible writer! I'm going to read it again!
Posted by alex
Very awesome!
Posted by patrick
hey booker. that series was so amazing, and i became so addicted. its 1.18am and i sat up all night to read the rest, (i began reading it on sunday) i was sceptical at first, what with the creulty involved, but youre right, it explores human nature and how we interact. thank you so much, and as a final testament - i laughed, i cried but i loved it!!!
Posted by john
i love ur story it really made me cry although the sex scenes are the one you are trying to sell here. i cant believe you put a great love story behind those things, it really glued me to my pc just to finish all the chapters. making the perfect characters that you will love. reading the story as it goes you will not focus on the sex scenes but keep looking on what will happened to the characters especially the main, you were really great in coming up on a story like these. it also made me realize how lucky some gay couple are and how unfortunate i am to let go of that "perect moment" in my life but i didnt regret it, i just face the consequence, hope to read more of your great stories
Posted by Nike
Awesome
Posted by Gab
I just rad the whole story...
And I must say it was great.
It started like... a complete porn story, but I think the end was so overly emotional that it can't be simply considered it an erotic story. It has something more pretty and delicate to it than that.
also.. it's more estimulating to read a story with some background that makes sense than just two guys who, out of nowhere, strt fucking
GaB
Posted by Madeline
Your writing is so awesome. I really think you should put all this into a book and try to get it published. Fuck try I know you will. Your other stories too. If you don't have enough for one book make a book with a bunch of stories. Every time I finished one section the only thing I thought about was reading the next section. Dude you are an awesome writer. The best I've ever read a book by. Keep 'em coming and try and get out a book.
Posted by Natalie
that was a powerful story with a fantastic ending. the end made me cry and i'm glad everything worked out in the end. Your an amazing writer and hope you carry on!
Posted by Michael
this was the greatest story ever. you are an amazing writter. that was so hot and sexy as hell
Posted by kyle
thats so hott wish i had some one like that
Posted by Savage Geisha
This story was more than just a silly story for a porn site. It touched me. The sex actually had apoint instead of just sex for the hell of it. I read the entire series in one day. I dont know what I waould have done if I would have started to read it when you first started. I probably would have gone into withdrawal waiting on the nex part to the story. Thank you for opening my eyes to new aspects of life. It was a great first time read. I think I will read secrets now.
Posted by chris fisher
this story fantastic it has inspired me to try & wright one of my own i know it wont be as good as i have never written thanks for a fantastic read it made me cry & my hand hrut i think i might have r.s.i. other parts are sore as well
Posted by Anthony
God, I love this story. I am a high school junior and I could relate so much.
I was moved to tears twice...
Sigh. I haven't found my love yet, but I hope I will someday.
Thanks!
Posted by Si
mate that was such a good story. Once i started reading them i had to finish them all to know what happened!! Beats any of the shit on tv. loved them!!
I am now a fan hehe!
Thanks!
Posted by Brian
all i have to say is thank you. your stories are amazing and i read them at just the right time. I found your stories by accident, and stupidly started with Detention 2. I imediatly fell in love with the series. i read every one up till 14. either 15 had not yet come out or im just really stupid and couldnt find it. Anyways, after i got to 14 i went back and read the first one i had missed. the way the characters had developed and wit such passion and romance. All the different points of veiw and plot twists. Im sorry it's over but i am just amazed at how awsome these stories are. Im going to start reading ur other series now. hopefully they're just as good. I know i shouldn't be on here, being only 14, but i love these stories and im glad that i found yours. i love the characters and have dreams about them. I just want you to know that i can really relate to your stories and they have really helped me through a tough time. They've helped me cope with my "gayness??" and i couldn't be more greatful.
Posted by BEN
OK let me start off by saying WOW. I read the whole story from beginning to end and it was absolutely amazing. I loved it. I enjoyed it so very much. U should really write some more cuz u are extremely good at it. The characters were awesome and the story line was soooo good. I love how you left it open to at the end. I feel as if I am suppose to finish the story in my mind. Well anyway it was one of the greatest stories I have read.
Posted by Steven
I loved your story, this is one of the best series on here. I identified with the character Jason. From his physical description and his characterization in general. "...I like somebody and then they like somebody else...". Then Jason found someone (something I still haven't managed to do). But the series "Dentention" covers Brandon and Chirs' relationship. How Bily and Jason came about wasn't fully explained; "Detemtion" leads the reader to believe that Jason and Billy have known each other and have a story of their own "'You,' I said, 'and me. It’s kinda weird.' I moved in closer to him so that I could feel the warmth coming from his hard body. Billy wrapped his arms around me and pulled me in really close to him. 'I never thought it would be like this.'" "Billy had fucked me many times..." They obviously have a history together.
If you were to write a spinoff covering the origins of Jason and Billy's relationship, I would read and enjoy it, as would many others. I don't believe it would take very long, six at the most. What do you say Michael?
Posted by ClyPinto
Kudos Mr. Booker.
The single best porn story (or should I say novel) so far.
Read all 16 episodes; I'm a big fan.
Posted by Amir D.
I now cab go to sleep satisfied, as i've stayed up till four in the morning. but it was not my fault, this story reeled me inand tugged my heart strings. i am glad it ended well. Love is like that sometimes, so intense it's like a hate, but when you figure out what it really is, it's the best thing in the world. Keep up the good work!!!
Posted by ken
that was one of the best stories i've ever read on this site, actually .. at all. whenever i stopped reading and went off to do other stuff, all i could really think about was what was going to happen next haha. man, great story (from detention 1-15part 1&2) .. really.
Posted by me
You know what, Michael Booker?
This is like the fourth time I read this story and it still makes me cry. Different parts from it. It was almost like to years ago or something when I first read it. Keep writing. Finish Secrets soon enough!
Posted by Steve
WOW. dude this story was awesome. i loved it. it's amazing that it wasn't just about sex, but actually had a point. please keep up the good work!
Posted by Tyloric
I liked your story, that much I will admit. You're a decent writer. I liked your characters and how they seemed flow and interact with each other. But... overall I had a really hard time enjoying this story.
Your grammar is awful, I mean really awful. Their were numerous mistakes through our the entire series (be it spelling, grammar, or spacing.) Now I'm not entirely sure how old this story is, I could be comments on a 3 year old story and not realize it.
And another thing that bothered me was the realism. I mean, come on. EVERY male in the story just HAPPENED to be gay? This was an issue for me and it really drove me away from the story often.
I see alot of room for improvment.
Posted by Like I'm gonna say
Fuck off Tyloric. You don't know what the fuck you are talking about. Have a look at many of the stories on this site by other authors and look at the grammar and spelling, even the story itself. Many are just a quick suck and fuck story with no real emotion or thought gone into them.
Fair enough, there may be times when a little mistake is found, but so what? There has been lots of thought, feeling and effort gone into this series, and many people, including myself, have been quiet emotional reading it. Michael's work is excellent and should be posted on gay other story sites on the internet.
Posted by Zach
I had a couple minor issues with this series. The constant sex scenes around the beginning made me roll my eyes a little. Also, how there were so many homosexuals (and stunningly beautiful ones at that) seemed unrealistic, as well as everyone lusting for Brandon and I had to laugh at that a bit.
That being said, It was a very good series, I liked it alot. The plot was very interesting and you have a good, strong vocabulary. You are also very good at describing things without being bland. You are an amazing writer (I'm sure you already know that though).
Posted by W
Enjoyed it. Was fucking awesome.
Posted by Ben
This story blew me away! .. you are an incredibly talented writer.
Something of this calibre NEEDS to be published. It's too good for a website like this. Id pay good money for this book.
Thank you. =]
Posted by James
This story was fucking amazing... I'm still crying as I write this. Thank you so much!! I also agree with Ben (above)... I'd deffo pay for this book!! Your an amazing writer, and am looking forward to reading secrets. Once again, thanks!
Posted by seb
I've read this like so many times now lol. I love the story so much. Btw it would make such a cool gay movie. I bet peolpe would love it.
Anyways great job on the story. I never get tired of it!
Posted by Bookerismygod
OMFG I cant find the words to descibe this story 3 u booker keep writing
Posted by Bookerismygod
OMFG I cant find the words to descibe this story 3 u booker keep writing
Posted by Brandon
Its like its my life, but his name is Jeremy
at first I didn't wanna read this but as you can see i made it to the end
Posted by andrew
detention was an amazing series but please! Dont stop now. PLEASE make more parts
Posted by Brandon
this is the most best story I have ever and I really wish that you will make a detention 2.
Posted by david
that was one of the most powerful things iv ever read
Posted by danny
this story made me want it for me and my guy. we are still in the detention lst time stage. LOL. Loved the story so much
Posted by Arana Thompson
You fucken asshole lol.
You made me cry so many times lmao...
Gosh, I sound so retarted and gay right now, probably cause I'm crying.. haha
I loved this story... Took me 3 days to read...
I share to similarities between Chris and Brendan...
I wish I had a relationship like that with someone...
But my life is shit, and sometimes I wish I was dead...
Sometimes I would think about hanging myself
Sometimes I would think about jumping infront of a train
Sometimes I would think about jumping out of the car, on the highway.
Seriously dude, you made one fucken good story here...
To be fully honest, its better than the Harry Potter series...
But yeah, it's so sweet and I want a relationship like that...
Gosh you fcken idiot lol... You made me cry bahahaha... ARRRRRRRR I still cant get over it...
Thank-you though...
Thanxs for letting me know deeper into what a relationship is...
Thanxs for letting me know whats important and not...
Thanx :D
Please write back. Stupid boy :P Haha joaXx..
btw I'm in Australia, so don't worry, I'm not gonna stalk you then rape your ass or whatever lol...
AniiwaiiZz bye!!! Thanxs for the good story man!!!!
Posted by jeffrey
Damn I loved these stories dey r d best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lik 4 real
Posted by mike
aww.. thanks so much for the happy endinge
this story was amazing
you defininetely need to write more of these
God you're great !!
Posted by Kyle
Mikey mikey mikey
y the fuck dnt i hear b0ut a n0vel? This st0ry is amazing. Ur skils are amazing!!
ive neva cried 4 a book. This series made me ball my my eyes out.
fucking fantastic mr br0oker.
p.s. Any of us wuld pay gud m0ney for a publishd buk or m0vie. Its awsum dude.
Posted by joseph
this was the best story i have ever read it reminds me of my own high school story complete with sex on the campus too
Posted by kevindee
my goodness this story made me cry like 100 times.
the best sries ever .
thank you sooo much 4 writing thig i love you 4 that. :*
it took me 3 or 4 day to read it. this story once agian is the best stpry evr ilove your discripttions about the charecter. 3
Posted by juan
hey i jus wanted to let u know dat i read all the parts to ur story in one day i was hookedi couldnt get myself away from the computer i realy loved it nd woould love to here about how chris nd b.r doing in the future i would love it if u wrote back to me
Posted by Erik
THE Beessttt story on here!!! I cried, I laughed, I got pissed, I got HARD as hell...I swear Mike, you should really consider writing gay romance novels OMG I would be your biggest fan!!! :)
Posted by Matt
The best thing I've ever read I read every one of these today n it is the best! Don't stop writing!!
Posted by Kevin
This Is The Most Amazing Story I've Ever Read 3
It Made Me Cry ;(
Don't Ever Stop Writing!
Posted by Vayden
That was such a great story.. The classic boy meets boy story. I loved it
Posted by blamulkyCam
Other variant is possible also
Posted by blamulkyCam
Other variant is possible also
Posted by blamulkyCam
Other variant is possible also
Posted by blamulkyCam
Other variant is possible also
Posted by j
great story michael. you should be a writer, lol. thanks for the story.
Posted by Ray White
Michael,
I started reading what i thought of as a usual Internet Gay Story, it was good,
but it was amazing you produced a Love Story, a Novel!.
You write so well, you Could Publish!
You have a hidden talent.
Have you placed anything on "Nifty Gay Stories" Archive Website ?.
I Feel this Story, takes all of our minds back to the trials & tribulations & what might have been of Teenage Years!.
So Many Thanks, Very Moved.
Ray U.K.
Posted by JM
mannn, these storys get better and better as I read them. I love you, and them so much I that I have read them over and over again, I fell in love with this story I've cried, laughed, and just read for hours. good job, please write a follow up.
Posted by jet silver
arrrrrggghhhh!!! continue this!!!
Posted by Jeremaiah
Best series of stories I've ever read! Thanks for this M.
Posted by Nick Ywan
You are one of the best writers ever!!love alll of your work that you have done..and I hope you continue with it!:)
Posted by Gary
Michael, I never been on such an emotional rollercoaster ride reading this story. It is amazing the way you have compiled the characters and story line in this series. Shallowness, depth, love, hate. Covered all the emotional aspects of a love/hate relationship that in the end all eyes are opened to the truth. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
Posted by Kaan Severbas
OMFG this story made me hard, made me cry and even made me think bout myself
THE BEST (pardon my french) FUCKING STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!
OMG, IM BEGGING YOU KEEP WRITING STORIES LIKE THIS SO I CAN LOSE MYSELF. 1000/10 IS MY RATING BABY XD
BTW KEEP THE 11" Chris Green in other stories....;)
Posted by callum
You should turn this into a book and publish it lol i couldnt stop reading this i felt like they were real people :L. omg that is like the best thing ive ever read :L x
Posted by Gus
Better than a movie. I forgot how many times I jo with the hot sex! Awesome! Love them all, thank you.
Posted by web cam
The pefect ending to a great story! Great emotion, great plot and story line, very well described sex scenes ans above all ... entertaining! 10/10.Your fellow author,
Web Cam. ps. check out my story "Help!" if you get the chance and let me know what you think :)
Posted by noel
thank u. I'm satisfied.
Posted by 132697
I think you are a very talented writer and your stories are great, but i cant help but notice that only one of your series' has been finished (this one), and you haven't posted any new stories, or parts of stories in ages. I would love it if you could finish them :D
Posted by johnny
you are a true writer.... i have always clicked on this website for a quick wank... but i wank to all part 1-15. the pleasure the imagery and the power of your word... get this published.. you will make a lot. you will be a star wrighter in the gay and bi comunity.
publish it nd tell me wen it out... i will buy it...
Posted by zack
i think you should do a short after story, like two to three parts of what happens next, you said you never ran out of ideas, and you seem very smart (in my opinion) and you are a great artist of stories, i would love to see a short story on what happens next after they get back together. Maybe answer some of those questions in the end? will they share it pubically? make it to prom? after they graduate.
But excellent writting bro. i hope you finish secrets at least.
Posted by jeibee
michael.. be mine.. im so in love with y0u.. still cryn.. major major happy..=3
Posted by Larry
Grrrrrrrreat story! Hope it could continue "forever" in the form of episodes or something!
Posted by shawn
Great story. I really enjoyed it. Please keep witting.
Posted by jeff
This story was amazing. it was a mental and emotional roller coaster for me as i read it, just because i could relate to most of it. even though you said that this was a simple love story, it was still fantastic. thanks for not giving up on the series and for finishing it, i couldnt stop reading it and when i was at school or work all i wanted to do was read more of it. im not going to lie, i cried and got angry at fictional characters, but that's what's great about your stories. thanks again.
Posted by rhaf
thanx for the ending that was so great. I'm happy for its ending but sad at the same time. . I realize that it would be sad for n0t reading the next part of this story. I wish you'll continue this story. All the feelings and em0ti0ns were felt by my, i didnt stop reading this, i started fr0m 3 o'clock am and i just finished it by 9:30 pm. Although i had to escape the three meals just to finish it. I really love your stories (SECRETS which made me c0nfuse untill n0w, ROOMATES which didnt finish, HEIGHTS which was und0ne and the others which are shorts) i wish you will finish them imediately. I started reading your stories fr0m the shorters to the longers thats why i cant get off this ph0ne this week. H0pe u will c0ntinue them this detensi0n also c0z i felt unsatisfied i want to read m0re of this story i kn0w there will be a l0t of hapenings there. So pleas pleas. . Micheal c0ntinue them. You deserve it, h0w lucky u are just like chris and brand0n. Luv ya!
Posted by scott
19 bi m if u got verizon txt me 814 330 5965 any age welcome
Posted by janelle
this will always be my favorite story on the internet.i've read it so many times i can recite it.lol keep writing
Posted by Roam
AMAZING!!! You need to make sure you keep a hard copy cuz this story was...no words can discribe it. Kudos!!! If this was an actual book I would have a copy for sure. You actually made me angry and sad and cry. You are a wonderful writer. Sad that the story is over but all great things must come to an end.
Posted by Jankyn
Ive just read the whole story, here is my analysis. After the first three chapters i was infuriated by Brandon and the way he always submitted to chris. I also found the sex scenes rather overwhelming since the plot was very weak but i kept reading. By chapter 6 the story started to take a turn and even your narrative techniques improved. Chapters 10 and 11 wow, i was drawn in i could not stop. There was that perfect balance between the raw emotions of the breakup scene and the sexual tension between all the paird charecters. I cried at the conclusion of what turned out to be am A-MA-ZING story... Two thumps up.
Posted by Danny
Hey guys add me to BBM (pin: 32218C24) i am 19 yo :P
This story is fuckin best story ive ever read!!!!
I hope they dont break up anymore :D
Posted by Louie
OH MY GOOD GOD it's the end aawwwww i want more and i can't stop myself from crying right now and to think what will happen to them afterwards i really loved it... I think i'm in love with Michael Booker hehe thanks and i hope you'll write more stories ok good luck :)) 3 ((:
Posted by Julian
This was amazing, still crying, im glad it ended the way it did.. Looking forward to more
Posted by zane
this was a very very good story
Posted by driven04
deym!!! most bestest story! ;)
Posted by driven04
deym!!! most bestest story! ;)
Posted by Danny
I think your a great writer and i loved your story, Detention it was great, i couldnt stop reading, well done :)
Posted by c
This was probubly the best thing i have ever read just the emotion and the connection that you build with the characters throughout the series is incredible and it made the story better because it wasnt just sex after sex after sex it was a love story, you have a true talent you should seriously consider a novel or even a movie wonderful wonderful storie
Posted by Stephen
DAMMIT, Michael! I had a shit load of stuff I was supposed to do this afternoon. I started reading your sory for a quick jerk off, but I couldn't stop reading it. Now, after blowing two loads and a handful of tears (I'll call you a fucking lier if you tell anyone about the tears), the rest of my day is gone. Thanks for a great story, but did you have to make it THAT good? I lost a whole afternoon. ;)
Posted by Stephen
DAMMIT, Michael! I had a shit load of stuff I was supposed to do this afternoon. I started reading your sory for a quick jerk off, but I couldn't stop reading it. Now, after blowing two loads and a handful of tears (I'll call you a fucking lier if you tell anyone about the tears), the rest of my day is gone. Thanks for a great story, but did you have to make it THAT good? I lost a whole afternoon. ;)
Posted by Michael Booker
I know it's been such a long time, but I will finally complete both Secrets and Heights. You should expect a new installment in the next few weeks. Also, I was thinking about doing a few Chris and Brandon stories, following them in the freshman year of college. Hope you guys are still willing to read them, haha...also I recently just published a my first novel (Yay) called 'Shadow' which is more along the vein of 'Secrets'. Email me at TheBooker1984@gmail.com or if you have twitter you can follow me @TheBooker1984, about how you can order my book and also if you have questions about "Heights" "Secrets" or the second part of the "Detention" series Thanks!
Posted by Rick
And what happened later he went to school and all. Man u must write it at last 1-2 more stories.
Posted by Giffy
I really loved this story,you are really a great author.thanks so very much
Posted by Jake Bentley
These 15 stories are the best, you are such an amazing story teller. If these stories were true or not you have touched me some many times, I have lived some of these painful memories that you have written, but OMG amazing stuff, write more please x
Posted by Alfred Mark
This is what writers seek for. A group of loyal, supporting followers that can connect with the story. Michael Booker, you did one heck of a job of appealing to pathos in this story. The tone, the smooth body collisions, the passion, and those infamous detention sentences transcended into the audience's emotions about the story. Making it an authentic piece of art that deserves to be published - if you are willing to work on some ares of yur writting. Amazing job, you'll be counting on my support! Keepin watchful eye for your following story!
Posted by Brendan
This series was absolutely amazing and I was hanging on every single story, let alone each paragraph because it really managed to seem so real to me. These stories would make an absolutely movie or series of movies just because they are just that great and intriguing. I felt I could connect with what was going on in the story, especially because i know a guy called Brandon Newman, but either way the stories were so great to read and if only i could have stepped into Brandon's shoes and have all the attractive guys and men falling for him.
Thanks Michael :)
Posted by Cole
I've never in my life read something that good. I literally couldnt stop reading. Im so happy that things worked out of 'em and im looking forward to more stories(:
Posted by Michael Booker
The second series of this story is available for sale (at a very low price) on amazon.com/amazon.co.uk ...you can email me at mikeskbooker@gmail.com for more info
Posted by john
Wow. Really good !!!!!!!!!
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