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Author: Michael Booker

Posted by Robert Lawrence Wilson

You repeated too much of the first part at the end for me and left it hanging about afterwards.

Posted by nick

OMG this was so hot i cant stop thinkin gthat this type of fantasy can really happen...

Posted by Brian

I loved this story.I'm with Jack please write more and it would be really cool if u made a second part.

Posted by Michael Booker

Um, I'm not sure why the story repeats itself. I really doubt that;s the way I submitted it. But, oh well. Thanks for what a lot of you said anyway

Posted by Alex

This story is great! The details are wonderful! It gives such imagery and I love how they still are insulting to each other as they have sex! This is a great story, very well written!

Posted by Kat

Great story, the ending was ohhhhhhhh so GREAT!

Posted by the g unit

great job both hands on the keyboard poeple that story was hotttttttttttttttt.

Posted by Cody

First time I have ever cried in a sex story. This one took me a while to read because It was only in my free time. But I longed to read it when I wasnt. Thanks for such a wonderful story Time for you to write a novel. That would be hott

Posted by paul

hilarious, man..

Posted by xman

loving every hot second of it,

Posted by edgar

i would like to make up too

Posted by Matt Johnson

Great erotic story! I like the irony of both boys saying that they hate each other while having hot steamy sex.

Posted by Brett

This story is so fucking hot man

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