i didn't like the first thing you said, that he is your husband now, it kind of kills the suspense of the story. and the end, when you said that you both went to gay clubs several times.
Posted by wow500 babe, i dont know if your planning on writing more-but plz do.you have skill and your story is relatable.. but always take your time and dont feel rushed. the best stories aren't just well told, but are captivating on and of the page.