Posted by Trigger I say definitely continue dude. You have a good, sweet and cute story. I really like the akward tension between the two. "So." "yea, so." Everybody can definitely relate to it though. Maybe seperate the quotes though, so you can track what Kyle and Brian are saying easier.
Posted by niv98 Please do continue... this left me really wanting for more. It's cute, light, and very intriguing. Wish I could read the next chapter soon.
Posted by mike Wow! that was excellent. Like others have said, please please write more. So looking forward to seeing how this develops! Thank you.
Posted by Bradley Yea u should continue this sound like a good story would love to kno what happens next
Posted by chris love it keep it going love storys like this so plz keep it going
Posted by Jack V. It's good. Finish it.
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Posted by ice love it keep it going love storys like this so plz keep it going i am thailand
Posted by Jake I think it was great, great story line, love the flash backs, the story has great potenital to be a good epic, get going I want to know bad what happens next.
Posted by Marshall You are definately on the right track. Please finish the story soon. Your style of writing is excellent.
Posted by Andy You are on the right tract.
I will be looking for more.
Posted by kaell i like whats happening so far keep going :)
Posted by Lee1746 Good story would like to know how the to boys make out togather
Posted by Nick wow, this is good ^.^ it reminds me of an experience i once had :D i would like to see it finished
Posted by jack o.O omg please finish the story!
Posted by Shane S Oh wow, thanks so much for the replies. I wasn't expecting positive replies, and I now find myself newly motivated to finish the story. Ive been giving it slot of thought, tying in personal experiences where possible. I'm going to start the next chapter tonight so keep your eyes peeled. Thanks again!
Posted by Kyle Dude it would be a crime if you didn't finish this story!
Posted by g@j.l more
Posted by john smith good storie, u should finish
Posted by manuel Please post some more IT WAS GREAT
Posted by Ken This is a great story, very well written and with a lot of emotion. Please dn't stop writing it.
Posted by Nick i love the build up!! the sex in a story is always so much better when there is a plot behind it :D
Posted by Sameer Continue the story. I eagerly waiting to read it
Posted by Brian the story is really worth reading!
Posted by andrew lawson this story is amazing and i would love to read the next part
Posted by Dusk Himself this is a great story, better than most on here, i look foward to reading more
Posted by Eric That was frking AMAZING!!!
please please please finsh it!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Bry Can you just please finish it? I need the rest of the story.
Posted by steve you are more then on the right track. Keep it coming
Posted by Max I think it was wonderful!!!! I would realy realy love to hear the rest!
Posted by Nick Its amazing. Dont stop. Im a sucker for happy endings.
Posted by tina and and .....this is my favorite....ima boy from a small town! lol the rest is a must!
Posted by Henry Please finish this story,it's extremely good,please write more.
Posted by scott Wow this is amazing! I love this story! Its do dreamy! Please send me the rest! : ]
Posted by Brandon Hell yer dude ur on da right track ceep writing and please finish da story u sound so interesting
Posted by Tom Omg ur so fukin AUSUM fuk kyle il have u any day!! so keep writin i want da fin
Posted by Adam I really enjoyed reading the story. would definately love to see this love story finished :D
Posted by fred finish itttt
i wanna read onnn!!!
Posted by louis craven i think you should write the finish to the story...
Posted by andre if you can please please finish this story! honestly, it has become one of my favorite stories because i can relate to it in the fact that i was in love with my best friend :/ so it means a lot to me and i know to countless others. it would help and mean a lot if you finish your writing. and by the way, the way you write is spectacular! please dont change a thing! :) all time favorite story :D
Posted by Gabe m Finish the story
Posted by kayson it was good
Posted by bret please finish! its so cute!
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