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Feeling Up My Naive Friend : Part 1 reviews
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Posted by reviewer8228
Awesome story! please continue it, I want to hear what he does next!, but make some more detail if possible.
Posted by Joe
Of corse you should continue! It's just getting good!
Posted by bob
YES
Posted by the honest critic
Writing level is basic and hinders any eroticism. Characters have no depth (what is their motivation? Desires? What personality traits do they have?). Saying something like: "I took my shirt off and he liked it" is not erotic--it reads like a virgin that is trying to express a fantasy but has only bad porn and elementary level erotic literature to draw from word/ideas from.
Posted by Suckmycock
Fuck that was soooooo hot, I cummed just like that. Of course you should fucking finished, I wanna see some more sucking, fucking, licking, etc.
Posted by kevin
Well done.Keek writing the way you want to and ignor morons like "the honest critic".Morons like him are so full of shit.........
Kevin
Posted by anthony
oh please continue
Posted by aaron garcia
shut the fuck up "the honest critic" this was an awsome story!!!!
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