Figuring out Love

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

100% fiction!

Hello, my name is Bryan, and this is the story of how i fell in love,with my babe, Edwin. First of all, this story will have very little sex, because ill try to express my feelings. i assure you that if i get positive reviews to continue this story, i will and more sex will be present there. Hope you enjoy !

Well, it was a new school year, and i was new to the school, and that i was very nervous about. I had moved out of my other school because of family problems, and so I had to movein with my mom, and so I had to relocate. I really hoped that this school would be cool and fun, with those thoughts I was ready for my first day of school. First thing I noticed, there were many ethnicities in this school, and I kind of stood out with my skin color, and I didnt like feeling like an alien here. So in my first period class, i noticed how these people had no problem with me moving in, I kind of fit in here. I wasnt the extremely loud kid anymore, now I could have fun with these people.

Well while I was getting introduced to new people, a guy named Jason caught my eye. He was very tall for me since im just 5'7, and he looked cool. First thing he told me was, hey you're very white. Are you White? wow, what a first conversation to have i thought. I sighed and replied "What would give you reason to think im white? Im not lol" i said. I was often confused for being british, being so white, and after living most of my life over there, I caught their accent."Oh cool" he said and left me hanging there and leftt. I was left standing there looking like an idiot, but being the new kid, it didnt take long for me to get surrounded by people again.

Lunch was monstrous, I started getting bullied by Jason. the names like "White Bitch" "Fagget" and other words cut me like a knife and I was so hurt. How could they insult me already without getting to know me yet? I was especially hurt because Jason spoke those words, and thosse words were hurled at me. Magically a guy named Edwin, pulled me from my back jacket,and dragged me out of the lunch room and i was in total shock. I wished if he beat me up, to please do it fast. When we were in the bathroom, he pushed me against the wall,so I couldnt escape him. He looked at my eyes, his green eyes pierced mine then he spoke. "dont worry, i wont hurt you. i was just getting you out of there. Just make sure you dont cross Jason's path again okay?" "Okay" i whispered, and he let me go."well i should get going..." i said and exited the bathroom.Back in the lunchroom I sat in a lonely corner by myself, and let a few tears flow. I was devasted, i knew this would happen,why would I hope for better? The weeks progressed, Jason became invisible to me, Edwin became my sun in my life. until one day i found myself in Edwin's home. By now,


i guess you could say we were brothers, or BFF as we said.I noted that he looked very nervous, and I asked him"You okay bro?" "Yeah.Yeah."

he said. "Its just my firstime having a sleepover, i dont know what to do" he added. "This is a first for me to" i chimmed in. He looked surprised. "Really? I thought that someone so hot like you would have had tons of sleppovers with girls" he said, than he quickly blushed. I guess he hadnt watched his words and he said i was "hot". I pretended i hadnt heard that, though in real life, i was basically about to scream, because he had called me hot. "so...? what you wanna do?" he asked me. after many options i gave to him, we ended up going to Navy Peer. We got on all the rides together, and god i loved it so much when we were forced to touch each other alot. I could tell he was getting more nervous by the moment. after that ride he asked me "you want to ride the Ferris Wheel?" while speaking those words his eyes pierced mine. I might've as well just fainted there. "sure. is that why youre getting more and more nervous? cause youre scared of heights?" I teased. "Ha. Yeah thats why' was his reply. being 11p.m. the ferris wheel was pretty much empty. Once at the top he was sweating of nervousness and so i told him "just spit it out edwin, whats wrong with you.?" NEVER did i expect him to reply " have you ever..... felt things for a guy...?" I WAS IN SHOCK! OMG i tried my best to reply calmly, bhut instead i just turned my back to him, and looked into the the city;s skyline. I felt his hands on my back, seeing i did no move to stop him, his hands continued until he wrapped me completely with his strong muscular arms. "beautiful isnt it?" he wispered in my ear. i dont know why, but i started crying. because my life sucked so much,i couldnt see my dad, i missed my old friends and family so much,because of Jason's bullying which had started again.

but mostly because after all, Edwin was here with me,and i wasnt alone. he quietly made me face him and looked into my eyes. "i love you" he simply told me and kissed me passionatly. he was my first kiss, and i guess i was his too.a million fellings cursed through my body. it was as if all i needed was Edwin. he filled in that piece of me that was empty. i realised that the reason why i considered him my own personal sun was because i was in love with him,too. before we got to the ground, we stopped it. while the ride home we held hands, and i had to fight the urge to go and hug my boyfriend(OmG HES MY BOYFRIend!!!)and kiss him. when we got to his suburbian home, he said, "stay in the car." "why???" i wondered. god, i felt like crying of happniess again when he opened my door and said"now youre allowed to come out honey" Omg, a tear escaped my eyes. he kissed it away. he took my hand and got me out of the car. then the floor disappeared from my feet, i gasped in shock. turned out he was carrying me without any effort. "wouldnt want my babe to hurt himself" he whispered. his parents werent home i guess, and so he carried me up to his room. once there he locked the door.

and we passed his bed and i was about to ask him where he was taking me when i saw that we were headed for the bathroom. i blushed, and it was a good thing he couldnt see my face in the dark. once in the bathroom, he sat me on the toilet and whispered passionatly "you want to take a shower with youre boyfriend?" i was so shocked that all i could choke out was a "i dont know..." i had never gotten into a bath with any guy and so he said "oh.youre not ready yet. its okay." but dissapointment colored his voice. not wanting to make him upset i said. "lets get in, anyhow youre my boyfriend now" i saw his eyes sparkle with excitment,love,desire, and perhaps lust? "i love you babe. lets get this going" he passionately told me as he slowly took my shirt off. i slowly took his shirt off to, i felt his strong 6 pack, his arms, omg, then i timidly went for his tight jeans.he was getting hard, and then i unxipped his jeans, and grapped his jeans from the legs and tugged down. they didnt buge, "oh babe,i need to get you a lil stronger" he teased me, and he pulled his jeans down. by now we were both in out boxers. he turned on the shower and faced me again.then the shock frose me where i stood. i was going to loose my virginity tonight. i had to remember how to breathe. i started blushing and fidgeting with my fingers. "babe dont worry, it will all be okay. promise boo" he cocooed me. i took a deep breath and took my boxers off.

being nervous, i wasnt very hard, he then took his boxers off and he was kind of hard too. which meant we were both bigenniers. we got into the shower and hugged there. he slowly kissed me and nibbled my ear, and slowly went through my neck leaving a hickie. i was so turned on by now i had reached my full 7inches. he was suprisingly 9inches. we kissed more, touched and embraced passionately. he scrubbed me and i scrubbed him. he then turned off the shower. and got out and told me to follow him. entering his room again. he had this hungeer-look in his eyes and turned me on so much. i instantly jumped on his bed along with him, and he jumped on top of me and kissed me passionately non stop......

oh so much more happened after this. if i get enough postive reviews telling me to continue this i will. feedback is greatly appreciated. you can add me on facebook if you like by the way.hope you enjoyed it.

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