Posted by Jake This story is great :) PLEASE continue it!!!!!!!!
Posted by Elliot This is a really good story I love it I implore u to write more plz plz plz. I love good love stories cuz I'm so into being in love I just love it... Lol anyway write more soon please.
Posted by Dak.Dan.Dill Dude you should definately continue with this extremely amazing story! I will be looking forward to seeing more! You are a very talented writer!!!
Posted by Elliot Very nice story the bully becomes the lover I absoulutly love it plz write more I'm dying for it
Posted by Gentleman Wonderful story indeed! Very touching and very creatable. Please, do continue to write such an immense beautiful chapter series.
Posted by James the story was great...I waited for a "sweet" ending but it never came...it left a lot to ones immagination. Keep writing!
Posted by Justin I enjoyed the details inside the story. One of the things that I especially liked was that you stayed true to the story and didn't give it a sweet ending. This was good. Some more information about Abie would be nice, possible directions for the story to go could be: a run-in with another guy with a similar crush, students that REALLY don't want to be near Ryon, possible responsibilities after school (work, clubs, teams, etc..), obstacles for the characters to overcome. This was a fun story and it wasn't super sweet. Good job!
Posted by Thomas This is very good and left me wanting more. He is good at characterization and this is much better quality writing than most on this site.
Posted by MarsBar Wait, I'm confused, was Abie the one that raped Ryon?
Posted by Ryon Martinson allright, to clear it all up, i'll explain. Ryon left his hometown school to go to a fancy private school. He left all of friends behind, including Abie. Abie and Jake hate eachother, te reason why comes in part 2. Ryon was born into a rich family so he was easily able to go to the private school. The reason why they left the private school is because a guy fell in love with Ryon and, ATTEMPTED, to rape Ryon. No one at Ryons old/new school know about the attempted rape, but everyone t the private school does. Ryon's main problem is that he's to nice to people, and people end up falling in love with him. Oh and if there's been any mix up, it's pronounced A-B, NOT abbie, like abigail. Allright, well that should hold you all off until part 2, thank you so much for the feed back, and of course, thanks for reading.
Posted by Austin I love this!!!! Continue!!!!
Posted by Moody This story was and still awesome!!! Please continue. I love this story cause it reminded me of me. Please. It's really awesome. I love it.
Posted by Jacob I love this story very much. It's wonderful and touching... and continue, please! I can hardly wait to read more.I LOVE U!
Posted by Ryon Martinson Hey guys just wanted to let you know that part 2 is under review by the admin right now, so it should be out soon, yay! There are gonna be some big changes, and most of all, many new people all throughout the series. Thanks for reading!
Posted by Jaycobie Wow that's a sad life ruined my hard :(