Posted by The Pup MIKEY...YOU DIDN'T KILL HIM...YAY!!! :-D...I'm happy now :-P! Your despisal of birds TOTALLY comes through in this one...LMFAO...again, awesome job!! For the last chapter in the series, I think that the Handfasting Ceremony would be the best...it brings closure while leaving room for new begginings! Anywayz, good job...once again, you amazed me! It's greatness!
Posted by caulme Don't end it - keep it coming - you can expand with Cory now. Let Mitch and Colby have a rest but bring them out when the get into Modeling.
I sleep real good after reding your story before going off to bed.
Posted by Kat Well, I guess all the fun's been had and used up, quite a trip, recalling the first Fire in the Firehouse. I guess 20 should be the end with 19 used to get Colby started on his new life and them planning their ceremony, maybe start building a Cory story to continue with after the end of this one, which I think should ideally be at the ceremony or a likely twist, where after all they've been through and all that, Colby's life change also see's a change in the relationship. I'm not against a happy ending, but it would be nice to see the unexpected happen, I mean we all expect them to live happily ever after, but who knows....! I do however, strongly suggest that you do a story centered on Cory. In my opinion, you've laid out a good foundation for building up his character and it would be unfair to develop him more fully as a number three.
Posted by Andie Just make it a happy ending for all of them. After all the bullshit they went through, they deserve it.
I also agree that the "adventures" of Cory would make great reading and Colby and Cory's father find love at last also. I have enjoyed the entire series and in a way wish it would never end!
AndieMann
Posted by GT just keep them coming - I have such a great sleep after reading your story. Do what you do best - writing that is - not to much suspense though.
Posted by Mike Well .............. it's taken me a long time to get round to reading this part of the story and all I can say is OMG - it was absolutely sensational - such amazing writing, such a sensual story. Now I'll have to read the next part immediately -well done Mikey!!!!!
Posted by Brad Hollister As long as Colby and Mitch end up staying together, im happy!!! :D By the way, I LOVE this series. Both me and my bf do. Possibly because we can both relate, he's a firefighter (and a really hot on at that), and i have a really evil step-mom (although she hasn't yet tried to kill me). Anyway, just make sure that Colby and Mitch end up staying together, and that would be great. Again, I love ur stories!!!
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