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Posted by Terkish
Wow, u r very good in your storytelling ... as ever!
Keep it up, man.
Posted by Scott Benson
It was okay...yes, just okay! What happened man? You can tell the stress is getting to ya! You did a good job compared to almost every writer on this site, but for your abilities it was okay. I found that it didn't have enough in it to grab hold of me, and I thought it was a little on the short side for the pace you were moving at...no offence intended at all by this, just a little constructive criticism! There wasn't much character development in this chapter...however you did open yourself up to spinoff if you choose to! Anyways, good job, but you can tell the stress is getting to ya, seems like you rushed through it...and yes, having the living headache talking to you CAN be annoying...LOL! My advice, slow down, and take a brief break!
Posted by Mikey
Yes, the stress has been a bitch. But, you're wrong. This part DID in fact develop the characters. I built on Cory. It was HIS turn to shine and I gave back story on him for a change. (I'd gotten a lot of requests to develop Cory more.) Mitch's abilities grew. And we also learned of Mitch's family. There was development, but it was other characters. And all the past characters came back for the handfasting ceremony. But, nature wrecked that. Reread the story Scott. :)
Posted by dwc
I think this chapter is as good as the previous ones - very interesting and well written. i enjoy reading your stories especially this one. Way to go mikey! but wait...was that an earthquake at the end of this chapter? hehe...another fire eh...
Posted by Kat
I just hope there's no tragedy to come, it would be just too much. Good story mate, considering and I hope it all works out for you. Will patiently wait for 20, though it will be a struggle I can tell you. I loved having all the principal characters back together again and all the families meet, just, like I sais, hope there's no tragedy in the making here and no sacrifices required either, Cory should get his club he's been through so much. But wait, I get ahead of myself, I guese you JUST can't keep that FIRE OUT OF THE FIREHOUSE!
Posted by Scott Benson
I'd like to write a retraction regarding my previous review. After reading Mikey's reply, I became aware that I must have missed somethings within the story and did RE-READ it! I realized that I missed a HUGE chunk of the story (about 6 paragraphs) and upon re-reading them they made the story not only make more sense but also much more interesting. First, I would like to apologize to Mikey, whom is an amazing author and deffinately needs to keep on writing! Secondly, I would like the give the story an outstanding review, it developed the characters in a way that Mikey only can, it also opened up many more doors that the story could go down. Finally, I would encourage others to read this piece of writing, it allows for more emotion to come out, and less of the mindless sex that the stories on this site seem to be mostly composed of!
Posted by Mike
Yet another amazing chapter - Mikey you are a pure genius - this is the most enthralling story I have ever read from any genre of fiction!! OK - so there've been a few chapters that have disappointed but it's the same with any story!!
This story could run and run - I feel you now need to take it in the direction of following Cory with perhaps an odd chapter or two looking at Colby as he moves in modelling (and Mitch - as he will so obviously follow him down that route)
PLEASE don't kill them off - just keep it coming but in a slightly different vein.
Thanks.
Posted by Tom
Have read everyone of your stories. Enjoy them a great deal. hope your move goes well and look forward to reading more from you. take things one thing at a time and it will all work out.
Thanks again for the great series you are writing
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