Fire in the Firehouse 19 reviews

It was okay...yes, just okay! What happened man? You can tell the stress is getting to ya! You did a good job compared to almost every writer on this site, but for your abilities it was okay. I found that it didn't have enough in it to grab hold of me, and I thought it was a little on the short side for the pace you were moving at...no offence intended at all by this, just a little constructive criticism! There wasn't much character development in this chapter...however you did open yourself up to spinoff if you choose to! Anyways, good job, but you can tell the stress is getting to ya, seems like you rushed through it...and yes, having the living headache talking to you CAN be annoying...LOL! My advice, slow down, and take a brief break!

I think this chapter is as good as the previous ones - very interesting and well written. i enjoy reading your stories especially this one. Way to go mikey! but wait...was that an earthquake at the end of this chapter? hehe...another fire eh...

I just hope there's no tragedy to come, it would be just too much. Good story mate, considering and I hope it all works out for you. Will patiently wait for 20, though it will be a struggle I can tell you. I loved having all the principal characters back together again and all the families meet, just, like I sais, hope there's no tragedy in the making here and no sacrifices required either, Cory should get his club he's been through so much. But wait, I get ahead of myself, I guese you JUST can't keep that FIRE OUT OF THE FIREHOUSE!