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Football Love: Part 7 reviews

Posted by Koua
Amazing! please don't make us wait 3 months for the next part
Posted by Erocis
Aww such a good ending! I just wish John and Alex would of been able to work things out!
Posted by Knaxe
I Loved this one! Teresa's from "Bank' right!? And jeeez you're in High-school? ! I swear I thought I was the only youngin' reading all this stuff... I'm thinking about starting an entry myself ... about a real experience! Email me I need pointers!
Posted by Oneal Haynes
Omgg is that really the end? This was one of your best work, I loved this story from beginning to end!
Posted by Bob
Dang the series was great and I like the ending, but I was kind of hoping for John to get a second chance. Over all great but I wish this last part was a little longer. Can we convince you to do another part maybe about what happens with his father? Also are you going to continue "a story" now that this is over?
Posted by johnny
i was so sad when monica was dying but then after when she started to breath i got happy and nice ending
Posted by Vander
I love it! Im gonna reread the whole thing again =D
Posted by Choppy
WOW! I love it! I am sorry it ended, I can not WAIT to see what you write next!
Posted by Barry
This has to be the best story I have ever read....you did an amazing job
Posted by Michael
I loved this series, the 7th part being the best. I'm really glad Alex and Jake got married, I knew they'd be the better couple. Although, I would've liked to see John and Alex get back together.
Posted by Nathaniel Ender
How great, now finish undead love, your stories inspire my writing and i cant wait to read what you have in store.
Posted by James
Loved every part I wish Alex and John could have got back together and married and this should beade into a movie no differences just the exact same
Posted by Taurus
John should be with Alex, they belong 2gether. If he doesn't want I'll take him lol...he's a good man, just made a mistake, don't we all? This is great reading. Thanx Dave
Posted by Wandile Bhengu
What a great story I am bisexual and I wish I could live a gud life one ,rights now I'm not enjoying my life because of judgement I am afraid off .I wanna wish every gays life a luck hopefully one day jesus will help me
Posted by David Bula
Sorry for those I confused but I am not in high school I am in college and two semesters away from getting my degree in creative writing and I will soon apply for my masters in creative writing
Posted by Liam
You should do a spin-off of Football Love.
Posted by Ricardo
Your stories were so beautiful. It broght me to tears so many times. Wonderful job. I wish you the best. You should definitly write till your hearts content. Would really love to get to know an author such as the one who wrote this beauty.
Posted by Princess
OMG, David, Thank you... This story had me jumping. I loved it. It was really beautiful and I loved every single character, I fell in love with John and liked Jake. I am a Samoan Transsexual, that just loves your story. Sad that this ended so soon, But Thank you for such a Beautiful story!!!
Posted by BobbyBlue
I LOVED this story! I hope everything is going/went well in college!
Posted by AJ
I loved this story to every single but. You could have let Monica die but thanks you didn't. And yeah I wished John and Alex to be together. But yeah Alex his happy with his first crush. Had an amazing time reading!
Posted by James C Bunnell
Beautifully Written. One of the best stories I have ever read. Thank-You.
Posted by Christopher Osterfoss
Just for pure closure, I need to know what happened to the man that raped Monica.
Posted by Christopher Osterfoss
just for pure closure, i need to know what happened to the man that raped Monica.
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