Posted by Melissa I loved the story...and Sophie and Mark sound like incredibly cool people to hang out with. Keep up the great stories, Brian!
Posted by Anon Ymous Great story! Wish I was Sophie...lol
Posted by Bear =D your stories always amaze me. I love them and how detailed they are. And that towards the ed of the story your spelling gets worse, I get it i think. As your writing your back tracking what happened in your head so you get sidetracked. hehe. i think its funny. You did good on both stories. i hope to see more.