Happy 18th Birthday, My Love

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

Intro: This writing is from the bottom of my heart. I find writing therapeutic, as well as soothing. This will be first official public posting. I’ll be the first to admit, I’m not an experienced writer (beyond college). I am not confirming or denying any statements, words or otherwise, that are in these stories. Names may have been altered as well for anonymity. If all goes well, I have much more to share. Enjoy!

*** August 01st 2008: 9:47 PM

I looked into his beautiful deep ocean blue eyes. It fit perfectly into his body, like everything else does. I lusted about what was going to happen in EXACTLY 2 hours and 13 minutes. I instantly got hard. He would be shirtless and I would be ripping off his sexy short boy briefs and:

“ADDY! ADDY! ADDISON CHASE!” Marc said. “Huh, oh sorry”, I said, almost completely out of breath. Marc rolled his eyes and gave his famous sarcastic grunt, “you were doing it again”. I gave a heavy sigh and said, “Look, we’ve been dating since I was 15 and you were 26. Our standards as a couple were constantly higher, I’ve only got to stick my tongue down your’ throat. I have fallen so in love with you I cannot wait anymore.

And very soon, on my 18th birthday, exactly at midnight, I get to finally not only touch, but to make love to my beautiful fiancé, whom I am going to spend the rest of my life with. Yes, a lot of my attraction to you is physical, but so much more of it is an emotional connection that is finally going to be complete. So forgive me for being excited”. He gave out one of his million dollar smiles and blushed a glowing red, and gave out a loving sigh. “Alright babe. You’ve been a good boy. Lets’ go ahead and get to our room. I have a few surprises before the huge package you’ll be getting tonight.” “You’re the biggest tease ever”, I said as the waiter, to my surprise, quickly brought us the check.

As myself and my future husband stood up, I took in his features, and realized I am appreciating them more and more by the second: He wore his hair down just for me today, I liked it that way, with no jell. I also figured it’ll be easier to pull later in the evening. Manicured eyebrows surrounded by deep ocean blue eyes. Perfectly round earlobes evenly proportioned. His gorgeous skin that always glows and has a hint of red in the cheeks. He has a big Italian nose which I find cute. He often refers to it as the burger king fryer, claiming it is greasy but I don’t see it. His perfectly red lips, which melt around mine instantly, sent a shock down my uncircumcised cock. As he turned around I admired his adorable little bubble but.

Tonight we stayed in a hotel actually inside an airport. Our flight leaves tomorrow at 11 for Hawaii and we wanted to be well rested and have no troubles. We got to the room, and to my amazement, it was redone. Rose peddles all over the bed, the hot tub/bathtub going with peddles as well. The champagne caught my eye. Two glasses. “Oh so we can’t have sex until I’m 18, but you’re willing to provide an underage person with alcohol?” I inquired. “Your right, I’ll send it back. Also, since you’re a Cali boy, you were born three hours before midnight here in Florida, so we need to wait until 3 AM.

Or, you pour us two glasses, we can get down to our undies and get in the hot tub”, he said with a seductive wink. I poured the glasses as he wrapped his arms around me from behind, and playfully bit my neck and earlobe. After I poured the glasses, I turned around, put my hands around his neck and then slowly moved them to his face. I looked into his eyes for a good minute, then leaned in so I can smell his sweet minty breath. “I love you”, I whispered before I leaned in and kissed him hard. After making out for a while, I grabbed him by the hand and took him into the bathroom.

“I’m going to undress you, and you’re going to undress me. You cannot touch, however, hands can glaze over certain areas as clothing comes off”, he said to me, with a curious smile. “Life up your hands”. I did as he commanded. He pulled me shirt over my head, his hands glazing my smooth chiseled chest. After he got my shirt off, he put his hands on my belt buckle. My heart skipped a beat. He slowly undid my belt and took it off me. He put his hands on my hips, leaned in, and kissed me. He flicked his tongue softly against mine, which sent my heart into overdrive. Before things got more intense, he pulled away from me and looked into my eyes.

Before I knew it his hands were on the button of my jeans. He very slowly, while looking into my eyes, undid the button on my jeans. “Turn around”, he whispered into my ears as he gently twisted my hips. I did as I was told. He grabbed my jeans from the inside and pressed his fingers against my underwear. I shuttered and let out a groan as he slowly exposed my almost bear ass. “Turn back around”, he whispered. I again, without hesitation, turned around, slightly shaking. Again, he put his hands on the inside of my jeans. However, this time, he put his fingers up, and gave me a devious grin. He pushed his fingers hard against my skin and slowly pulled down. Only a slight piece of cloth came between my hard, uncut, eight inch cock and his hands. I groaned even louder and almost came. After he finally got my jeans off, he took his hands, picked up my face, and passionately kissed me.

Less than a minute later, I slightly pushed his lips away from mine. I put my hands on his chest and ran my hands down to the end of his shirt. My long finger accidentally brushed up against his jeans, and could feel his thick hard cock throbbing. I slowly pulled his shirt off, lightly touching his chest all the way up. Less than a second later my hands were on the button of his pants. I undid the button and placed my hands on the inside of his jeans. I must’ve gotten inside his underwear too, because I felt his thick but groomed trim job and my finger lightly touched the base of his cock.

He let out a huge groan and slowly pulled my hand up. “Sorry”, I mumbled. Shaking in pure bliss. “Turn around”, I whispered into his ear. He slowly did as I told. I put my hands in the inside of his jeans and slowly felt the impression of his ass through his short boxer briefs. After I got his pants off, I turned him back around. I stood right up close to him, chest to chest, underwear to underwear. Our cocks throbbed as they touched each other. He pulled away and said that was too much. I looked at the clock, shocked to see the moment was closer than I thought: 11:40.

I took him by the hand and we both got into the hot tub, champagne glasses in hand. After sipping champagne and aggressively making out, I got on top of him, and put my smooth twink butt right on top of his dick. I wrapped my legs around him and pulled us tight together, faces inches away. Marc leaned his head back and closed his eyes, and let out a long, “Ohhhhhhhh”. I pulled his head up by the back of his neck, and lightly kissed him. I slowly opened my mouth more, and he did the same. I flicked my tongue on his, and we both, at the same time, shoved our tongues to the back of the throat. I looked at the time for another pleasant surprise. 11:54.


I slowly pulled away and undid my legs from around him. I got up, my bulging member showing a major indent in my underwear. “It’s time to dry off”, I said as I winked at him. I helped him out and we dried each other off thoroughly , and we both did under our underwear. As 12:00 finally neared, my heart stopped, and he took me by the hand and led me into the bedroom.

“Happy birthday”, he whispered into my ear. He put his hands on my back, only this time he didn’t stop. He put his hands on the outside of my underwear, right on my ass, and squeezed. I put my head on his chest and let out a large groan. I then realized I can touch my future husband! I put my hands on his chest and wasted no time going south. I teased him like me teased me, but after of pinching his thick and long member from the outside. I put one finger on the inside of his underwear, feeling his smooth pubic hair. I pulled back and looked him right into his eyes. Both holding our breath. I looked south to see a gorgeous thick and long uncut cock with a slight blonde fuzz trail.

I grabbed his penis from the base and slowly jerked up. At the same time, he let out a groan and put his hands down the front of my underwear, feeling my completely smooth public hair, and grabbed my uncut cock and pulled upward. I let out a loud, “OH GOD”, and then forcibly yanked down his underwear and watched as they dropped to the floor. I grabbed his ass and at the same time he yanked my underwear down and bit down hard on my neck. I took a step back, and we both admired each other’s naked bodies. I then smiled and gently pushed him on his chest onto the bed. I got on my knees and grabbed the base of his cock.

I put my mouth near his wet and hard cock and slightly stuck out my tongue. I flicked my tongue on the tip of his cock. Loving every taste of his penis and cum. He let out a large breath, and as his body shook, leaned his head all the way back and closed his eyes. He gently stroked my hair as I took his entire thick member down the back of my throat. Marc screamed in ecstasy. I cupped his balls in my hands and slowly went dow and stopped when I just had the head in my mouth. I wildly flicked my tongue back and forth. Marc was precumming like crazy and, as I stroked his cock and played with his balls, he told me to stop.

“But I want to suck on it more”, I said. “Later baby, I’ll cum”, he replied. With a smile, he then asked, “Want to know what it feels like”? I smiled and he stood up, and I did too, cocks touching. He kissed me passionately and touched my nipples, realizing when I let out the largest scream ever, that he found my sensitive sweet spot. He smiled and held his tongue out. He then went to my right nipple and pressed his tongue into my right nipple as he played with the left. “Baby if you don’t stop, I’m going to cum without you touching me” I said, while shaking and trying to catch my breath. He kissed me one more time, then grabbed my cock and told me to lay back, relax, and close my eyes. I did as I was told.

I looked at him as he pulled back my wet foreskin. I closed my eyes and a second later I felt the tip of his wet, minty tongue touch the head of my cock. I never felt anything so good in my life. A second later, the head of my cock was in his mouth, his tongue flicking all around and going up and down on my head. Then, without warning, he let go of my cock and grabbed my balls, then taking my entire cock down the back of his throat. I let out a large groan and screamed his name. I grabbed his hair and showed my cock as far down his throat as I could. I let him take back over, and he pumped my cock and tickled my balls as he sucked hard on my cock. After 15 minutes of eternal bliss, he asked if I’d like him to go lower.

“Yes”, I managed to whisper. “Put your legs around my shoulders”. He then pulled me up by my butt cheeks, spreading them. He put his tongue gently on my tight little hole. Gently, he inserted his tongue deeper and deeper, and after pulling him by the hair to get deeper inside me, I beg him to put in his 11th finger. “Oh you want it, don’t you baby?”. “Yeah, baby, please just put it in me, I want you to fuck me as hard as you can”. “No”, he said with a smile, and gently put a dime drop of lube on my hole and put his middle finger on my hole. “Ready to have your cherry popped?”, he asked as he applied slight pressure.

“Yes, baby, oh, oh”, I moaned as his finger, with his pressure, entered my tight twink boy hole. He twisted his finger around slightly and thrusted the rest of his finger in my hole. After a few minutes, he entered his ring finger too. He put my legs down and came up to me and kissed me, fingers still inside me. He kept thrusting in and out, finally, in a whisper like tone, he asked if I was ready for us to become one.

I smiled and shook my head. I grabbed the lube and his dick. I put what must’ve been half a bottle of lube and rubbed it all over his cock. We got the warming kind, and it was worth every second. “Missionary baby?” he whispered. I slowly nodded and he picked my legs up and I wrapped them around his neck again. On his knees on the bed, he slowly placed his cock against my tight and hungry hole. He pushed slightly in, getting half his head in. I let out a large groan, in slight agony but almost pure bliss. He pushed a little further, and I could feel his dick head fully inside me now. He grabbed my cock and stroked hard.

He leaned down and whispered, “I love you” again, and kissed me. While kissing me, he thrusted his cock fully inside me. I could feel his cock involuntarily twitch, and he let out a loud expletive. Continuing fucking me, he picked up the pace. He grabbed my butt cheeks and pinched them gently, while fucking me as hard as he could. After about I0 minutes, he yelled “IM GOING TO CUM, I CAN’T, OHH HERE, OH, OH, OH GOD!”. After he was done panting, he pulled out of me and I felt my hole close over, all wet with thick warm cum. He kissed me and placed my hands on his ass. I bounced his ass up and down, and he laughed. I smiled and kissed him. I told him to get on all fours. He did as I instructed.

I spread his butt cheeks to reveal a tight little hole. I put my tongue on it, and then inserted it all the way. I grabbed his cock and stroked hard, all the while him screaming my name. After a while of eating him out, put a dime size amount of lube on his hole, and put my finger on his hole. “May I?” I asked. “Baby, you don’t need to ask my permission ever”. I smiled and slightly pushed in. I grabbed his cock and stroked it. He was instantly hard again. I got my entire middle finger in and moved it around. After finger fucking him, I leaned forward, put my cock in his hand, and told him to lube it up.

He pulled my foreskin back and jerked it, letting the foreskin go over the head. He spit on it and put his mouth on it. After licking it for a minute, he grabbed the lube and put it all over my dick. Stroking it hard. I pulled back and put my 11th finger on the opening of his hole, I pushed slightly until my dick head was in. Marc let out a large groan, and I continued to stroke his cock. I pinched his left cheek with my other hand, and fucked him hard.

Less than five minutes later, I couldn’t hold it anymore. I shot my huge load all up his ass. After a minute of fucking after I came, I pulled out. I laid down beside him and he put his head on my chest. “Happy Birthday”, he whispered and winked.

Unfortunately, we would not live happily ever after.

To be continued...

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