Posted by steven mate this is an awesome story def keep it goin ill be looking forward to it
Posted by rmn56@hotmail.com Excellent story, keep up the good work, and please don;t be like others saying you will continue them don't you have a good gift at writing keep it up.
Posted by zack Continue it and it will be an amazing story
Posted by kamaki more, more, more, more
Posted by tomi u're a superfine author ... moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
Posted by Prince Very nice and wonderful experience.I wish I could fall in love with my best friend.Nice story please lets have the rest of it.
Posted by Nathan Great story!