Posted by jon o my god this is the greatest storie i hav ever read please make the next part realy good (even though it already is)
Posted by Web Cam haha, I'll do my best jon ;) I check these review pages as often as i can, the best part for me is hearing what my readers think :). Thank you for reviewing! I will check this page at least once more before i post the next part!
Posted by Tim Oh my god, Keep going!!!! Serously, KEEEP GOOOING!!! This is a great story, the only one i've actually followed from the beginning! This is GOLDEN MAN!!!
Posted by Rico This is entertaining.
Posted by Nic Fantastic Webcam! It was so exciting to read that I couldn't stop till it was over..
I am soooo looking forward to how you are gonna end this story... Though I hope the ending is going to be long! It's going to be sad to leave Danny and Jake.. But then I can't wait to see what story you then are going to post.. Your story are so good! Hope you never stop! :D
Posted by Joey CarMichael u had me in terms.. plz continue writing.. i want to kno what happened ok.... i'm thinking that the father blamed Jake for Danny's state bcuz of the way the nurse stated the thing but plz... continue to write i'm waiting eagerly
Posted by Joey CarMichael *tears not terms...
Posted by Web Cam :) You'll have to wait and see what happens next ;).
Posted by Rico Not bad.
Posted by dak wow this is a very detailed story. i have been grippd right into it!!! thanks for such a great series!!! i hope your other stories are as good as this!!!
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You are now offically the best writer on this website!!!
Cant wait for the next installment. I loved the drama in this chapter. Please more.
Posted by Ian AHHHH MORE don't stop the stories are amazing! Pleas hurry with part 14!!
Posted by neil i am just simply in love with everything in this story.....cant stop my tears rolling whenever i think abt the story..... i love the way u have written this whole story....cant possibly explain wat mark u have made in my mind....
Posted by Web Cam That's really sweet neil, I'm very flattered. You have made my day :). Thank you all for your comments so far. Part 14 has now been submitted. Hopefully you like it. :)
Posted by jack i love this story i have spent all day reading from part 1 to part 13 great u are a great author webcam cant wait to read part 14 when is it available cuz i cant find it yet and really want to read it. I will difinately be reading your other stories
Posted by Web Cam Thank you Jack. I'm glad you like it. You should be able to read part 14 as soon as the site puts the next bunch of stories up. :) Hopefully that will be in the next couple of days.
Posted by timothy yang i love these stories and when will the next one be out?
Posted by neil its betterto wait than to have this story come to an end....i wish it didnt end....cant address u webcam,its kinda rude....its was nice to have a reply from u....good to see u r concerned abt how ur readers feel....waiting for the website to update ur new part...
Posted by Web Cam :) I like to keep my readers happy. It's always good to know that my stories are being enjoyed.
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Keep in touch and keep up the go0d works, i'm very satisfied.
Posted by Web Cam :D Thanks again for the great reviews and ratings! This is currently the 2nd best rated story on this entire website! Don't forget, if you enjoyed reading help, my new story series has started. It's called "I Don't Want The World, I Want You!" and you can find it on my author profile page. :)
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