Posted by JJ Hey its really goood but could you make the story longer because u r at the climak and BOOM its over. U got a good skill thats how stories are supposed to be written.
Posted by Pat Great story so far, I hope they at least remain friends.
Posted by Daniel Nice story , when will there be more ?
Posted by nick Hi.Your story really did touch me.I do wonder,in this sometimes crazy world,why sex is so confuseing to people.We all do have a brain,and we all do have our own hopes,and plans,and dreams.If this story is true my heart DOES go out to you.
Posted by Fer I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.
Posted by Fer I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.
Posted by web cam The next part should be along fairly soon (maybe next week) sorry it's taking so long but I'm afraid i don't have much free time at the moment :)
Posted by web cam next week being Feb 15-21 :)
Posted by Cory S. I cant wait to read the next part! Great job!
Posted by web cam ;) Thank you cory.
Posted by russ You are an impressive writer.
Posted by web cam Thank you very much :). I'm glad you like my writing style!