Posted by JJ Hey its really goood but could you make the story longer because u r at the climak and BOOM its over. U got a good skill thats how stories are supposed to be written.
Posted by Pat Great story so far, I hope they at least remain friends.
Posted by Daniel Nice story , when will there be more ?
Posted by nick Hi.Your story really did touch me.I do wonder,in this sometimes crazy world,why sex is so confuseing to people.We all do have a brain,and we all do have our own hopes,and plans,and dreams.If this story is true my heart DOES go out to you.
Posted by Fer I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.
Posted by Fer I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.
Posted by web cam The next part should be along fairly soon (maybe next week) sorry it's taking so long but I'm afraid i don't have much free time at the moment :)
Posted by web cam next week being Feb 15-21 :)
Posted by Cory S. I cant wait to read the next part! Great job!
He decided to be a little more daring, and began licking Joey's smooth bulbous cock-head. Kyle run circles with his tongue from the piss slit spiraling outwards until he reached the raised and hot purple edge of Joey's cock-head. Kyle re-positioned himself on the bed and engulfed the head of the hard cock in his mouth. His eyes darted back to Joey's face for an instant, and Kyle got the shock of his life, dropping Joey's pole. Joey was awake!