Posted by Keith Santini Very good so far. I really enjoyed it. Good story, go ahead and submit part 2. I'm sure that it is going to be a hit with the crowd.
Posted by Dan Well that was so interesting I just cant wait to read part 2
Posted by Thatcher Jones Very good start. Can't wait to read part 2. Look forward to see what happens next.
Posted by KENRICK Hello there i dont normal read stories like this.. but i like this one :) alot ...... hopefully u post the other segements soon
As I stood on the edge watching the waves hit the cliff face a hundred feet below I knew their would be no turning back once I took my first step. With a tear rolling down my cheek I closed my eyes for the last time, took a deep breath and stepped off...