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Posted by Mike
Not good compared to other stories from this author. Lacks intensity and finished much too quickly after a reasonable build up. Only worth 1/10.
Posted by Athan Halliwell
That was really good for a while, the wording and they way you described everything. It got sloppy at the end, you were too blunt during the sex. I suggest you take a little more time and explain the sexual encounter with the same symbolism you used earlier in the story, and maybe talk about the morning...Unless you plan to write a second chapter.
Posted by Jesse
I didn't get what the dude was saying...
Really... I didn't like It...sorry
Posted by Ayden
Ahah...I dont get it...the beginning had a little too much symbolism if you ask me, very confusing.
Posted by Lost Love
I liked it until the ending. Total mood killer. What happened? It was so filled with love and fear, everything that a relationship has. This would of been a favorite of mine if the ending didn't suck so badly. =\
Posted by marc
not very interesting to read
Posted by L
i would have to agree with everyone else here
it was over way too quick
Posted by Romeo
I agree with everyone, it was very bad. How can you build everyone up and just let them down with that terrible ending.
Maybe you should rewrite this story. You should describe the sex, the morning after, the drive-in etc...
What I got from the story was the set-up. That what it all seems like.
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