Posted by Ken That was scorching hot. You did a very good job of writing this story. I hope there is more of the brothers cuming.
Posted by Sebastien Your sex scenes are descriptive and did make me horny. But I'd rather read a story with an actually plot. If you do write more stories about the brothers, could you please create a more believable situation?
Posted by martin rammsonde Well, I confess my stories have anaemic plots and little character development, but it is, after all, porn. Personally, I hate porn where one has to scroll through pages of pointless dialogue and plot to get to the hot stuff. Maybe I'm just too impatient. Still, it might be interesting to try and write something with a compelling plot that doesn't get it in the way of, um, jacking off. Thanks Sebastien for the constructive criticism, and thanks Ken for your positive review.
He was turning 16 and almost out of our puberty stage, while I was 16 and had a car. We arrived at the movies and got all the snacks and goodies that would keep us preoccupied for the movie....He took my hand and zipped down his pants and let me feel his nice hot sizzling dick.
