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Posted by Web Cam
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Posted by Brandon
nawwww web cam I love ur stories lol so you need to post the next one asap ok =]
Posted by Web Cam
Still writing it I'm afraid :). I'll post it as soon as i'm done i promise. I randomly started working on another 1 off story last night too lol. It's not a series though.
Posted by Gannon
Awwwwww why'd u stop? What a taese u r ooohhhh it makes me hungry for more!!!!!!!
Posted by Web Cam
The next part has been posted and should be up soon. :)
Posted by *
Love the part 1! It was a little to cheesy at the beginning but quickly redeemed itself. It also might be better in the stories to come, if you leave all the "I love you talk" out. You (Author) talked mutiple times about how much they loved each other but I think it's better to let the reader figure that out by their actions and what the charecters do and say. *
Posted by taurus
great story, beautiful writing, i just wish the two guys brushed their teeth before the passionate kissing. Eeuww
Posted by Web Cam
Haha! Yeah you're right, that is horrible! However it would kind of ruin the moment if I put a gap in the story where the 2 characters romantically...go and brush their teeth? lol. Yeah, when I read it back I realised that I really didn't do a good job when I wrote this story. I don't like it at all. Oh well, I've learned from my mistakes and my next story will be much better! :) Thank you for your comments! They really do mean a lot!
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