Posted by Mike Well, I wouldn't bother writing any more if I were you!! This story has the qualities that a story written by a 9 year old would have. It is purely descriptive (and not particularly good in that field either) and lacks any decent characterisation or build up to the actual sex. It has to be the worst I've read for a long time. Sorry!!
Posted by Tom I love your story.I wanted to be guy with you I am hard and horny with my 7 and 1/2 erection.You turn me on as I read your story.
Posted by jerry My mother always told me that if I can't say anything nice, I shouldnt's say anything at all. So i'll just say nothing and suggest that you take to heart the review from mike above mine
Posted by L it was a good stroy but maybe add some more details and stuff, it's not rubbish and it's not excellent but it is good
She was hovering over him like the most charming hunter - eagle magnificent and overpowering. She radiated warmth, love and her pressing needs to feel him inside her; she was the most beautiful lady ever, hunting. Hunting for her need to be loved, by him, as he lay down with divine beauty that was never seen or heard...