Posted by jankyn "Am gonna came mate!" - "mate", really??? Hahahaha. You are good with description and creating emotion but your story wasn't worth much. OK I understand that perhaps the jist of the story was sex but there was no drama at all. Boy and boy are best friends, boy loves best friend and tells him, best friend immediately accepts and they have sex. The End. Not only was the storie predictable it was difficult to complete as a result. Am going to upload my storie, Parting Glances. In a week, please read and tell me what you think.
Posted by dgdhf this is so fake
4056 words continuing the adventure started in, "The Wall -- Outside".
Lots of action and a short introduction. I promise someone will be getting some before the end of the first page.