JUstin and Me reviews

Need to work on grammar.

The story line was okay, but they story was written horribly, and filled with poor grammer, it kept me from really enjoying it.

I agree with all of yall, the grammer wasn't the best.

Holy Cow, Well When I First Started Reading It, It Sounded Pretty Damn Good. Then, As I Got Into The Story It Just Fell Apart. First Off, Your Grammar Is Posotively Sickening And Really Ruins The Story, Jesus Learn Where To Put Suffixes. And Second Of All, Who The Hell Fucks In A Classroom! And In Part 2 You Mix Up Everything, And The Story Really Makes No Sense. I Suggest You Get Out A Storyboard And Plan Out Your Stories Before You Just Throw This Shit Down On Paper. Oh Yeah, And Try Proofreading a Couple Of Times, And An English Class Might Help. Dumbass.