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Jack and Kyle - Part 10 reviews
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Posted by Cris
Please continue this story.
Posted by Estevan
Wow this story was amazing. Hope you write another part.
Posted by Eddy
omg please continue the story!! i stayed awake all night reading.. hope u do the next part soon
Posted by Brian
wow. first off all I LOVE YOUR STORY! i just found out about it today and i'm hooked.. probably the best thing i've read on here. i really like your characters and those little gestures between them that show how much they really care about each other. your story is more than just sex.. its about love and that really caught my attention
one word of advice though
right now the story is going round in circles.. klye wants jack. but kyle also wants max. its all about how irresolute he truly is. i mean he's a strong character right? he should know what he wants
Posted by mahonny
end things with max i want jack and klye to be together only they are the perfect couple
Posted by Gustav.holan
This story is so my life lol I also think u should focus more on the two main characters jack and kyle
I heard once people will only love the hero as much as they hate the enemy :D
Posted by Romeo
I like this story, keep it coming.
I think you should keep things going a little with Kyle, Jack, and Max. It shows how Kyle is struggling with emotions with more than one person as we do at one point. I like how Jack is making Kyle emotionally stronger.
I think you should bring Kyle and Jack friends back into the story because they both need someone to talk to about their situation. Kyle is obviously having a problem that he can't talk about with Jack and he need someone to talk to. Jack is having a problem with and he need someone to talk to. That's what makes their friends good for the story.
We still like to know about Kyle background. Why did he leave home? May be that can be why Kyle can't let anyone but Jack see his weak side.
You need a little more characters because Jack and Kyle needs someone to talk to when they can't talk to each other about.
Keep writing. We not only seeing sex, we seeing a story.
Posted by stephen
I have to agree with Romeo we're not only seeing sex, we're seeing a story. Not only a story but the complications of a teenager strugling with love, and who he wants between two guy's.
And yes, you do need to give them both friends to talk their situation out to.
so, keep writing please.
Posted by Mike
Don't break up Kyle and Jack or I will never read your stories - how about a 3 way where Max Jack and Kyle ride off into the distance as partners and live happily ever after :)
I had sex with my boyfriend and my ex in a three way - it made us stronger. My ex does not bother me, does not control me, we don't have sex, my BF loves me and in fact my ex and him get on well, we have all moved on so get over it, just fuck, move on, let go, build a bridge and get over it and stop being drama queens.
Posted by Lucas
hay just letting you know i LOVE these stories i have read them all and they rock my cock.
luv Lucas
Posted by Cherrie
Please continue this story!!!! I really want to see how Kyle resolves his feelings I just hope he ends up Jack!!
Posted by tom
plz keep it goin
Posted by Steve
How does it end? Don't let Kyle cheat again and kill his bf with the news. Max is evil.
Please post another!!!
Posted by Harry Vasqusz
Hey Jake all of these stories it's so FUCKING good I want to know what happens next please continue them and if u can turn in to a book that will be awesome and I will sure buy it no matter how it cost I got a hard on in every part.
Posted by Harry Vasqusz
Hey Jake all of these stories it's so FUCKING good I want to know what happens next please continue them and if u can turn in to a book that will be awesome and I will sure buy it no matter how it cost I got a hard on in every part.
Posted by eshaikh
it will be really hot if max kye an jay jay cum together as a threesome
Posted by Mr. person
I thik max should get so angry at kye that he rapes him
thats what it seems like is going to happen by what is going on anyway
Posted by Andre
I just love your stories with an amazing passion, Please continue with this series.
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